Reviews for Victim of the Fall (The First Draft)
Afrancum1 chapter 9 . 12/22/2020
that was intense. I'm glad Hermione was able to see herself as others saw her and her contributions
kinnik chapter 10 . 1/18/2020
Hmmm...I bet she forgot to take her heroin potion and this is the beginning of withdrawal. Odd that her teacher would give her such a highly addictive potion and that she would have no qualms even though I'm sure she knew what the drug was.
Reluctantlyobservant chapter 10 . 12/12/2019
I just found you and your fics. I really love your writing and the depth you add to the characters. Really enjoying this so far!
frankieloo1 chapter 13 . 7/31/2019
Holy. Shit. I cannot stop reading! I really hope since Grindlewald wrote the book that Hermione will think to go talk to Dumbledore. I'm dying to know his opinion on the matter of Dividing Lines and on the book.
misslyss3592 chapter 9 . 7/30/2019
this is so beautiful
frankieloo1 chapter 7 . 7/30/2019
what a freaking plot twist
frankieloo1 chapter 6 . 7/30/2019
I fucking knew it, I KNEW IT
sleepyhoney chapter 18 . 4/9/2019
I swear you gonna make me cry again and again with the mention of Nirvana, and this fic is depressing af i can literally feel heavy with all the emotions and gosh this might just be a coincidence but i wonder if the tragic history of nirvana frontman has influence your fic, because im not gonna lie, it reminds me of kurt every time. the moment isobel said thanks to hermione so suddenly, i knew something wasnt right. and the moment hermione found her in the lake, i can literally hear dave grohl's voice screaming I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN bloody tragic im crying
sleepyhoney chapter 5 . 4/8/2019
i know im late to this party but, i cant believe that you made a reference to Nirvana IM CRYING and i do feel you too man. and it was kurt's 25th anniversary of his death a few days ago. the feels...what a coincidence i stumble across this fic
WhatNowWhoHow chapter 41 . 12/2/2018
Holy hell. This was incredible.
Guest chapter 21 . 10/10/2018
They kissed! They finally kissed!
Guest chapter 11 . 10/9/2018
Oh man. I really felt for hermione in this chapter
Guest chapter 38 . 7/9/2018
This chapter was heartbreakingly beautiful..explained the true essence of Draco ..what he actually is...no one ever has captured his soul so perfectly in FanFiction except you
Guest chapter 37 . 7/9/2018
Really good story ..I only wish Draco was better than that
Guest chapter 29 . 7/8/2018
This story serves so many more reviews..it’s so perfect ..I just hope it’s a happy ending
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