This is an excellent story! Maybe my new favorite! The writing and the plotting were great! Hopefully the author checks in from time to time to review these accolades.

Wow what a amazing story. So many twists and turns I couldn't put the story down. Well written and the plot was great. Thank you.

I've been through FF a dozen times, and I completely missed this story. Great story and a great read!

Great story and well written- thanks for this!

Great action writing! Very exciting chapter with a bunch of surprises!

Wow everybody is a suspect now! Insane but very entertaining plot!

Big developments this chapter! Is Jenny the killer? Hmmm

Cool way you had Chuck figure out what happened- nicely done.

Well that’s some wild plot! I didn’t see that coming!

Well I didn’t expect that spontaneous Charah combustion! Not that I’m complaining- it was pretty great, just surprising. :-)

Poor Chuck trying to sort out what in the hell is going on with Sarah around!
Your story is well written and I can’t remember another one that had Chuck wondering is Sarah was going to kill him for so long. Quite the roller coaster of distrust!

Classic Morgan - ruining the Charah moment…sigh. LOL

That felt like a quick transition from untrustworthy to smooching but hey they seemed into it so who am I to judge? :-)

Nice dancing scene and wow this really different from canon at this point so I’m pretty interested to see what happens here!

Reminded me of Casey’s funeral when you had them poke Jill!

Wow this got crazy quick! I guess I should have known she was dead from your summary - duh. LOL

Katie huh? Chuck still being with Jill is an interesting spin on canon as well. Is Sarah stalking him for the email?