|Reviews for Locked out of Heaven|
| StrongGuy159 chapter 3 . 4/2
Amazing 3 chapters continue please.
| PugTheMagician chapter 3 . 3/26
this story seems curious to me. for one thing, was the fruit naruto ate the ACTUAL ryu ryu fruit or simply a creation made using smile like the one that samurai kid ate. for another, were naruto and mira lovers? i just wonder because from the way she spoke about him getting handsome and such it sounds like they last saw him as a kid yet the whole satin sheets thoughts kinda ruins that theory now doesn't it. and the title itself, i'm surprised nothing has alluded to it in any way so far except for wendy's heaven heaven fruit, more curious about that than any real problem with it. sorry if they sound too critical. i do love the way you had naruto react to seeing happy and mira by thinking he was drunk. and i'm curious about mira, did she eat the demon demon fruit or something? (that'd translate as akuma akuma no mi right? dunno, my japanese is rusty) and with naruto an actual dragon, what is the gimmick of the other dragon slayers? i mean, natsu can't exactly weild flame since ace ain't dead yet unless you make a paramacea version of the mera mera no mi (actually, that'd probably fit better with his fighting style anyway) and gajeel i guess would have a ridiculously strong haki and tekkai ability or something. i wonder how the straw hats will end up without kizaru attacking them, unless that had already happened. i am merely assuming the only reason kuma sent the straw hats away was because they would be dead otherwise so that could always change. lastly i am interested in how the toads will come into this since i assume they will from the short mention of them in regards to what naruto can remember
| Ricc850 chapter 3 . 8/16/2014
Good story and I say both.
| PlrStaley chapter 3 . 8/13/2014
epic chapter keep it up!
| uscias chapter 3 . 8/7/2014
Please update soon.
| Markus-Antonius chapter 3 . 8/1/2014
Sort of anticlimactic with Mirajane and Erza.
| Dimenstorm chapter 3 . 7/28/2014
the pre view is really intense.
you must update next chapter ASAP
| Greyjedi449t chapter 3 . 7/28/2014
This is an interesting concept for both One piece, Naruto and Fairy Tail in one go. I'm looking forward to what comes next :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2014
form a crew and also get his memories back like always also why a triple xover
| Blood D. Cherry chapter 3 . 7/26/2014
next chap please, update as soon as possible
| Hartha chapter 3 . 7/26/2014
A Good story so far. I would like to see more.
| Minato 1 chapter 3 . 7/26/2014
| T51b Moridin chapter 3 . 7/25/2014
Heh. Looms like loads of fun.
| T51b Moridin chapter 2 . 7/25/2014
Lol. Someone from his past so soon. Painfjl wake up call.
| T51b Moridin chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
So as an obviously ancient dragon...magic is obviously something he can do. Rend mountajns with a finger split oceans with a flick of the wrist, end galaxies with a 20 minute long chant. Talk about power. jma miss kurama if knly for the jokes. Kurama is a bundle of laughs. Also he should make his own group or crew or revolutionaroes or world whatever. He doeant jave to follow no one! Also robin and anko need to somehow be his girls along with anyone else we wish to add.