Reviews for The Begining to Adventure: 1
Lyra Styles chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Nice but some words didn't fit in the right spots. (That's just my opinion) ;)
Blake1234 chapter 10 . 7/15/2013
I shall leave a review! Good chapter!
Blake1234 chapter 9 . 6/1/2013
Mine blow
Blake1234 chapter 7 . 3/18/2013
Long chapter... I must say
Blake1234 chapter 6 . 2/7/2013
one word(not counting these ones:Whoa..
Blake1234 chapter 5 . 1/17/2013
good chapter!
Blake1234 chapter 4 . 12/24/2012
nice. but why kill rachel! why not cassie or jake or marco?
Blake1234 chapter 3 . 12/12/2012
at first i was lost then i realizied that it started of from chapter 2. Anyway nice chapter! can't wait till ch. 4!
Blake1234 chapter 2 . 12/1/2012
Good Chapter! Chapter 3, can't wait!
Blake1234 chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Love it! Can't wait to read more!