Reviews for do the dance
sangkar chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
I have to point out, you don't actually /own/ the pairing. I wrote Roxanne/Lily before I read this - even heard of you. x3

Other than that little thing (that doesn't even have to do with the story), I really liked this. Your writing is pretty good.

Good job.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
This was most certainly an entertaining read.
autumn midnights chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you! :DDDD I love this so much. This is;dlkfj it's amazing. You know how much I adore Roxlilu, and I'm so glad that they got back together in the end - I was rooting for them the whole time, even though that meant going against Scorpius/Lily. Speaking of, I love that you included them, since I also love them as well, and I love the friendship between them here also - the scene where Lily falls asleep crying in Scorpius's arms is just really sad but also sweet because he's there for her. I love your development of the Lorcrox relationship as well - you actually made me ship them here! It's so cute how Lorcan was fine with being late because it was being with Roxanne, that was a really cute moment :3 I really liked the dialogue in here as well - like you said in your author's note, it was definitely raw and realistic and it just seemed so perfect for this fic. I loved Roxanne and Lily - "I suppose we've both had our fill of dicks." "Lily!" "I didn't mean penises." That made me laugh, I can totally picture Lily saying that. Your characterizations were so good as well, you really developed all four characters so perfectly, and I just really really enjoyed reading this :DDDD