|Reviews for Caught In The Act|
| Night-Being chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
And this was my dream come true! My three favorite Akatsuki men in bed... all together! Yaay! I'm sorry I don't have any proper description for this than: OH MY JASHIN THAT WAS HOT! *_*
| AntwSpring chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
Hehe that was fun
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
That was the best threesome I've ever read ! Wow!
also wow cause I never thought I would say something like that :s
| AccountKillerSOSxx chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
HOLY SHIT!This was amazing I loved how you made the entire sex scene long and detailed and it was hot...Deidara Itachi and Hidan...LOVE IT!
| MzPearlz chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
Hell yea to both questions! Bout got me droolin xD jk..maybe xD
| coolseal9 chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
| CeeBoo chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
First time reading a threesome in a long time o/ / / /o sorry if my review is crappy D:
Liked the smut, very hot and sexy ;) I always thought that Deidara could put some good use with those hands of his /_\ ItaHida is a very interesting couple, and I might read more of them later on ;D
Deidara should walk in on Kakuzu and Hidan next XD I'd like to see how taht would turn out.
| Dei-is-mine chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Holy hell.. How did Hidan restrain himself?!
| ZeroYaoiPrincess chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
*Sits staring at computer* um... wow, that was... just wow. i loved it. great job. *runs off to stop nose bleed*
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
I just fell in love. Never liked the pairings of them together, but you have changed my perspective. Thank you for that.
| danicat91 chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
Finally! I've been looking for yaoi stories and drawings that involved Deidara's hands! Jeez, it was basically the first thing I thought about when I saw those tounges. :P
The entire story was awesome, by the way! Loved it!
| Koga's-Midnight-Lover chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
| ColonelPony chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Woooooooooooooooooo you just made my day! :D
| Mettlei chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Hey... this might get long...but I review as I read. Also ignore the mistakes I'm back on the 'cool' keyboard.
So the first thing... I really liked the Jashin comment... it's very pleasing that I found something amusing in the first paragraph so it promises to be good..xD
Oh god... I mean oh Jashin! Itachi really is... sucking... *blushes* and damn right Itachi is good... yes I haven't gotten very far but I am enjoying this...a lot.
*not really thinking straight* I cracked up at Itachi's reaction to hair pulling..xD seriously? And I don't think Deidara is right... an angry Itachi in bed would be...interesting...
... and now Hidan's pulling Itachi's hair and we get a completely different reaction to it...and Hidan is just...hot. I like the way he treats Itachi here.
Yes the word 'toy shocked me as well not just Hidan. I dont really like the word in yaoi context but I know Itachi meant it in a good way, so its okay.
Meh you know I adore HidaIta... the way Itachi didn't seem to pay all attention to Hidan while... uhh never mind, let's see how it goes with Deidara... you get extra points whenever hair is being pulled..xD
! that’s it! Thank you! Thank you for making Hidan like this... the naughty bastard how I love him! Making Deidara turn around like that... to see them both and correct me if I'm wrong but the riding position is what you though I will like so much, huh? Well you were right.
*finished reading* okay... it was really good and I liked it a lot! You know I did. You did meet the requirements except for one :P Deidara wasn’t forced to join... he joined rather willingly... but forget that, it was great. And holy... the story is kind of long... no way mine will reach those numbers. But this sort of inspired me to write mine now... it's just that no way in hell I'm getting anywhere close to this level of greatnesss..xD
I enjoyed it, thank you for writing and sharing it.
| x-OrigamiAngel chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
I think this was very sexy and you seemed to meet the requirements! Hidan was very cocky and kinky.. And those hands of Deidara's are very sexy.. Very hot, you did a very good job on this one! I also liked Itachi calling Deidara a toy.. Hehehe..