Reviews for Innocent Innocence
Guest chapter 14 . 4/12
Well hell. I kinda wanted them to be pissed off. I mean five years, a sudden mission, and a "Hey, the kids are yours because of innocence?" I mean there's so much they missed. First steps, first day outside, first birthday, first word etc. And Allen is acting like he's the only one who suffered. Ummm nooo... You don't get to pull that bullshit Allen you could've had the help you needed instead of being a prick and hiding it. Scared, sure, but you don't deprive someone of their child without valid reason like abuse or something. And it's not rape if you like it, and from the lemon he seemed to enjoy himself quite a bit. Besides, you could've taken it slow so you can calm yourself and warm back up to them. There were ways besides hiding their kids from them.

Geez. I feel so bad for those two...
marmag1 chapter 26 . 3/25
I really really really really LOVE this story!
aliceWALKER14 chapter 26 . 4/8/2017
i hope this has a sequel though..like if allen could meet them in his spirit form n surprise them but that would be to sad ...
aliceWALKER14 chapter 23 . 4/8/2017
i m tearing up...why u DO THIS author -kunnnnn!
aliceWALKER14 chapter 18 . 4/8/2017
allen is really an ideal parent n a person ...
Crimson-Finder chapter 26 . 1/9/2017
I like the story, even though it made me cry. Good job.
Naz chapter 25 . 8/21/2016
I'm not the type to swear but shit that was sad, I cry a little...yeah a lot, It really a good story.
bookiez chapter 26 . 6/3/2016
the ending makes me T.T this is beautiful
Blackthorn Nightshade chapter 26 . 4/22/2016
This story was incredibly well written. I am not that sensitive a person, so it came as quite a shock to me when I read the Epilogue and started crying so hard that I almost couldn't finish because I couldn't see. but they were tears of mixed sadness and joy :)
Quixling chapter 26 . 4/15/2016
Im sobbinggggg
kamimeraku chapter 26 . 1/27/2016
It got my tears running like a river T. T... Great fanfiction
Gusty Guest chapter 26 . 8/10/2015
*tries not to cry*
*fails quickly*
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 20 . 8/5/2015
Thank goodness! I almost took his comment about finding a girl at face value, but I like this better.
ShadesofStrange chapter 26 . 7/12/2015
I like the way this story is constructed. Great fic :)
TimcanpyWantsDangos chapter 26 . 5/25/2015
That was one of the best fanfics I read in a while and can you make an Alt Ending where Allen doesnt die?
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