| Reviews for Smoke and Peaches |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2024 A really good story. Natsu was written beautifully. Lucy I think would be a hidden freak (books, toys, her whip, etc) but still a virgin. She would be knowledgeable but just as inexperienced as Natsu given her upbringing and her character. I just don’t see any of these characters as anything but virgins obviously for different reasons each one. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2024 More pls you write natsu so perfectly dominant and mischievous. His clumsy novice attempts being swiftly turned to calculated edging |
| A fan chapter 1 . 9/28/2023 I’ve been reading this story for years. I’m an adult now and it’s still one of my favorites, beautifully written. I don’t even keep up with fairy tail much at all anymore but I like to revisit Nalu sometimes, brings back so many memories. Hope you are well! |
 BBandit chapter 1 . 12/31/2022 its so hot and well wrote! the little cheese you mentioned at the end was all in character for me. Natsu is increasingly sweet on Lucy who is still as fiery as ever so it wasnt too much atall. very great fire hot storyIm picky about quality too lol I can abandon stories mid sex scene if too poor of quality for my standards just in the wording, sentence structures, feelings conveyed or if its not closely similar to the original story. so thank you for the great story and I wanna read more from you |
| Dechechia Frans chapter 1 . 5/27/2022 I've been trying to find this story for a month now and i still cant het it can someone please tell me if this book was deleted or if it's on some other reading app please |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2022 absolutely amazing oml |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/19/2022 TikTok brought me here, love this |
| heyheyheyhinatahey chapter 1 . 2/19/2022 is this story gone now |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2021 AHHH! SWEET AND SPICY! Loved it. |
| Copperreign12 chapter 1 . 10/26/2020 Absolutely loved this story! It was awesome! Amazing smut! |
| Elle chapter 1 . 7/20/2020 That was hot! |
| BoredPiglet chapter 1 . 4/17/2020 Loved it! So glad you didn’t “burn” this |
| Lynnie chapter 1 . 4/5/2020 Um holy cow that was so good Im kinda speechless. Like. Holy cow that was just so good. I have been looking for this fic for years and honestly its so satisfying. Like don't get me wrong Im blushing like crazy but it was so hot. Thank you for actually including the clit like oml. Why is that so rare. This was just perfection. |
| sugarplum2498 chapter 1 . 9/11/2019 HAHAH I understand what you mean about looking back at ur old writing and cringing, but this was really good! Of course I’m sure you edited it, but yeah this was a really well written smutty, yet entirely wholesome story! I liked it a lot! |
| Ushindeshi chapter 1 . 9/10/2019 Beautiful lemon story. |