Don't worry it ain't that bad. I've read lots of lemons and stories worse than yours its actually arousing(minus the cheesy parts) . Damn make it a vampire lemon next .

The review that said "hot and steamy. I love it" was me! Lol sorry I didn't mean to send that as a guest!

Hot and steamy. I love it

Yes. I do

I read the whole thing. I've sinned. But holy shit this was great. You're awesome

Good job, definitely gave me a picture.

Nooooo, freaking mobile typing sucks. I got cut off.
As I was saying, this is one of, if not my absolute, favorite NaLu fics out there. So please don't burn it lol.

Much love!

Please, please don't burn this. This is one of (if not my abs

Best. NaLu. Sexy time. EVER! *favourites 1,000,000 times*

It's so nice when a love confession that occurs after the act in these kind of fics. Not before, or mid-way through, or straight after in the hormonal high. A proper "holy crap, what even was that?!". Love it!

Omg good story! I almost cried at the end
I loOOOVE NALU SOO FRICKIN MUCH hehe
Keep writing gurl. You have talent

Wow! LOVE!

That was soooooooooo good
Cant even tell it was only ur 2nd time tying to ryt a lemon
Keep it up

God damn, I should not have read that, being a teenager myself , but that was honestly super fucking entertaining. I think after reading this fanfic Nalu is my favorite ship in all animes I've ever watched. 11/10 :)

It's awesome ! Love your writing especially adherence!

Even if it's out of your comfort zone, you did a real good job at this.. It wasn't clumsy, it wasn't hasty, it was a good pace. I liiiiiiiiiiiiiked it!
~Ai