Thatvwas so freaking cute

*fangirl scream* that was the best NaLu lemon I have ever read, it's actually one of my fave lemons in general (yes I guess u could call me perverted I don't care) (•/•) I especially loved the part where Licy gets a little insecure at the end about Natsu's feelings and I love that heartbreak moment :) I love your writing and yes your may update I totally feel you but please don't set this one on fire because is was beautifully written :)

THIS WAS BEAUTIFULLY DONE . (Please keep in mind that I don't think I am just yet a pervert) I absolutly love your writing style, the details are UGH I CANT EXPLAIN IT I JUST LOVE IT SO MUCH! I am acttually for once thankful for writing a somewhat novel. I would like to add some sexy/smutty scenes in it, maybe, I'm not fully sure yet. (Don't let the fact that I am indeed female fool you, I probs am a pervert just won't accept it) in my inexperianced eyes, which can't seem to friggen spell, your pretty much my writing idol and goddess. I may worship you now. All in all I think this was beautifully written and I enjoyed it.

(P.s. yes I indeed have looked back on old and new writing and have indeed wished I burned it. Sadly I know of no safe places to burn them without burning other places down)

~Raven the fox like vampire. Sorry for the tome of a review~

Oh, my ./.
That was, uuuuhhh, amazing...

Omg it was so. Damn. HOT! *blush* And i really appreciate that you went out of your comfort zone. It actually shows that you are willing to write anything for us, readers. Please keep writing stories like these. And don't talk about setting it on fire i would pull my hair out if you did that.

Loved this so much. Such a good story. And you are a good writer. Everyone should read this.

Best lemon I have ever read. This was jut amazing and you are an awesome writer.

I dont think it was a cheesy ending, it was simple and you got the base point of the story I have to admit that sex scene was intense and well brought on.I have to say it got me a little excited as well, and I get what you mean about the girl hormones.

I am glad you stepped out of your box, this was an awesome oneshot.

I fapped to it and then cleaned it up with my sweatshirt ;P

DAMN-THIS STORY MAKES PORN IN GENERAL LOOK INNOCENT!
CONGRATS! :)

fATHER I HAVE sINNeD-

I read this and I have sinne D

Why would you want to set it on fire? I think it's wonderfully written. Very descriptive and believable. You should be proud. :)

It was a good lemon, untill it flat out said that Lucy wasen't a virgin. That just ruined the mood and destroyed any feeling of that something special happend. If you are going to round of a steamy and love filled lemon with stating that Lucy hade sex with other guys before Natsu, Then how are we suposed to find the ending sweet and satisfying?

You should have either made both inexperienced or let Natsu have sex with another Girls before he seeks with Lucy.