|Reviews for Symbiosis|
| Guest chapter 14 . 11/14
The quiliuet spirit warriors were the wolf shifters they were called spirit warriors because they were warriors from the tribe who put wolf spirits inside of them giving them the ability to change into wolves
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/14
Elazars power only allows hI'm to tell if someone is gifted and if thier gift is similar enough to one he knows he can GUESS what it does not outright preditct it and know for sure what it does like you have
| Lord Asmodeus chapter 9 . 11/5
This is complete bloody idiocy. This is so completely mentally stunted, 'retarded' that at times I was completely astounded. If this is how the average human thinks in the contemporary world, without any sense of healthy paranoia suspicion, or a manipulative bone in the body whilst in a xeno situation. Then our lives are going to be quite short if there does exist something more in the universe.
| llippert1000 chapter 10 . 11/3/2014
Well, I see the "pulse" is NOT a heartbeat. Curiouser and curiouser.
| llippert1000 chapter 7 . 11/3/2014
Aack - cliffhanger. So glad I'm reading this as "complete".
| llippert1000 chapter 5 . 11/3/2014
Body possession transference. Cool!
I'm guessing the "pulsing" sensation is a heartbeat.
| llippert1000 chapter 3 . 11/3/2014
How interesting. So Twilight never existed?
Oh - should I have reviwed again in Mandarin? :-)
| llippert1000 chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
哇 - 做一个FIC潜水，终于决定开始这个。爱它为止！并根据要求 - 这里是普通话。
| TheWickedTruth89 chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
Interesting start, incidently that's pretty much how I felt when I saw the films.
| keith chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Twilight is not a chick a vampire saw it men over 20 &30&40&&50 &60 saw it.I dont know where anyone would think it was a chick flick.
| Virgil Stein chapter 26 . 12/19/2013
Am I allowed to review my own story?
| TNM-Writer chapter 26 . 9/25/2013
I was actually very surprised when I came across this story; never before have I found an OC-insert story that wasn't a girl, and didn't fall in love with a Cullen, not a Denali. When I read the summary, I actually kind of had a freak out. I was all "WTF, MALE OC, WHEN DID THIS, CAN'T UNDERSTAND, IMPOSSIBLE, blah, blah, blah". I just had to see what this was about, see if it was possible that it could happen and be well written, and I must thank my curiosity towards that decision. The story was absolutely amazing, and I can't really explain how to put it into words. It's like when your trying to a explain a word that just IS and cant be explained, if you get that? Like, try and explain the word "You". Hard, right? You, is just...you. Just like Symbiosis is amazing, and just that. I'm actually kind of glad, as well, that there wasn't any kind of sex or affectionate things in here, aside from that Esme/Carlisle thing you had. Which kind of made me want to buy brain bleach because of the images *shudder*. It would have ruined the overall awesome quality; too many stories of other fandoms - as I have yet to find another male oc Twilight fic - are just "Sex, beer, boobs, beer, sex, drugs, money, SEX". It get's annoying after a while, and too repetitive. Loved the story, and I don't think I'll find something quite as good as Symbiosis for Twilight OC fanfictions for a very long time, if ever.
| Guest chapter 20 . 8/29/2013
I swear to god if he doesn't get back to tanya I will hunt you down and skin you al- make you rewrite it
| Kine X chapter 26 . 6/14/2013
Awesome fic. I'd love to read a sequel to this... xD
| Wollerosekaufn chapter 26 . 6/11/2013
This story was AMAZING! Thank you for writing it, I couldn't stop reading .thanks for sharing :)