|Reviews for The Weekend at Uncle's|
| Edhla chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
I enjoyed reading this story, it's a pity there hasn't been more reviews for it :) Your dialogue is nicely done, though a few more commas here and there would really help the meaning of what you're writing.
The dog was frightening, but I wished it had gone on for longer! The scary is in the detail :)
On a different note, if that private info on the bottom of the story belongs to you, I'd *really* delete it from your draft if I were you. I tend to fuss a bit online and I'm not sure how old you are, but your privacy's really important, particularly hiding details like that. :)