Reviews for Hinata the Slave
spiritwolf35 chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
I guess I can check this story out
nicholas.souddress chapter 3 . 10/9/2014
I will need to be careful when I get a girlfriend and never let her read that tip!
btw its good to see women taking in interest in writing naruto smut!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
Checkmate bitch ass soccer moms!
-INTHEDARKESTNIGHT (and proud of it!)
Guest chapter 5 . 5/10/2014
The reason people do not comment on your story is because; no matter how great a story is, if it is all smut, or the majority of it is smut, people tend to not comment on it because; it's either very uncomfortable for them to say anything, they'd be shy. The second is most people might have some comment like: "or came so hard while watching this, it may be hard in seconds, biggest load i've ever blown!" (Please note, if this sounded perverted or messed up or anything like that, it was supposed to sound like that, I have no idea what someone like that would actually say. I'm just giving a basic example. I'm not putting my username, and I want a message back, please just take this into consideration.)
Guest chapter 4 . 5/7/2014
Please enslave ino, please enslave ino, please enslave ino, I really REALLY want you to enslave ino
Kaiba1288 chapter 5 . 4/7/2014
Cool story, Good luck with this looking forward to
reading the rest of the story.

Ja ne
Kaiba1288
classified chapter 9 . 2/2/2014
i like this story and i think it's wonderfuly written the only real things that bothered me was the spelling at least do a little bit of spell checking would be nice and a little bit of redundancy perhaps try including more things like more whipping and actual bondage with chains or foot worship or something along those lines
KTlovesmoney chapter 9 . 12/16/2013
I Give This Chapter A 91/100
KTlovesmoney chapter 8 . 12/16/2013
I Give This Chapter A 94/100
KTlovesmoney chapter 7 . 12/16/2013
I Give This Chapter A 93/100
KTlovesmoney chapter 6 . 12/16/2013
I Give This Chapter A 96/100
KTlovesmoney chapter 5 . 12/16/2013
I Give This Chapter A 95.5/100
KTlovesmoney chapter 4 . 12/16/2013
I Give This Chapter A 95/100
KTlovesmoney chapter 3 . 12/16/2013
I Give This Chapter A 88/100
KTlovesmoney chapter 2 . 12/16/2013
I Give This Chapter A 70/100
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