|Reviews for Hinata the Slave|
| classified chapter 9 . 2/2
i like this story and i think it's wonderfuly written the only real things that bothered me was the spelling at least do a little bit of spell checking would be nice and a little bit of redundancy perhaps try including more things like more whipping and actual bondage with chains or foot worship or something along those lines
| KTlovesmoney chapter 9 . 12/16/2013
I Give This Chapter A 91/100
| KTlovesmoney chapter 8 . 12/16/2013
I Give This Chapter A 94/100
| KTlovesmoney chapter 7 . 12/16/2013
I Give This Chapter A 93/100
| KTlovesmoney chapter 6 . 12/16/2013
I Give This Chapter A 96/100
| KTlovesmoney chapter 5 . 12/16/2013
I Give This Chapter A 95.5/100
| KTlovesmoney chapter 4 . 12/16/2013
I Give This Chapter A 95/100
| KTlovesmoney chapter 3 . 12/16/2013
I Give This Chapter A 88/100
| KTlovesmoney chapter 2 . 12/16/2013
I Give This Chapter A 70/100
| KTlovesmoney chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
I Give This Chapter A 85/100
| xFrail chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
Nice story..but your little shit that you added makes you look like a child, and not an especially bright one at that. Whoever is behind the website has the right to take down any story you post. There's literally nothing you can do about that. The whole 'you can't stop me, I have a legal team blahblah" nonesense is just idiotic. You'd be wasting your time. Go read up on the T&C, and legal matters such as this a bit more before you make threats like that next time. It's not even a big deal to begin with.
| chris chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Cool I like it
| Williamgbirkin chapter 9 . 4/17/2013
While I do find the subject matter rather distasteful, I also find it facinating. This is a very well written fanfic, and I was and am rather intrigued by the psycology of it. The dark side of humanity is very interesting and I thank you for writing this.
| 61394 chapter 9 . 3/11/2013
| Ultimoto The Great chapter 5 . 3/8/2013
This is weird, twisted, cruel, and just plain nasty! But, it did get me very very horny.
Also are you realy a vet of war. By some wierd way of the wind, I'v never met a vet of war exept for my great grandfather who served in The Great War. You know, the one they now call WW1 or World War 1.