Reviews for The kid's aren't alright
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
This is...somewhat depressing. I still liked it though. good job. :)
ujemaima chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
That was a lovely wee adapted rhyme! I don't get the' double wide' bit but nonetheless this was good!
Masque chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
The shroom is quite a writer, well done. Keep it up, especially if they are this awesome.