|Reviews for Kaleidoscope|
| angelcat2865 chapter 37 . 2/27
Beautifully done! All three.
| Guest 8 chapter 36 . 2/10
Excellent ! Last one is a lovely story
| Deya Amaya chapter 36 . 2/9
Mei Ling? O.o that's . . . um, unusual X3 glad you updated :D
| angelcat2865 chapter 36 . 2/9
I like how you said so much with so few words on Curtain!
Love the idea of Fai meeting a female with Kuro's fighting skills her teaching them to him.
| xauroragoddessx chapter 35 . 1/25
I've enjoyed this story so far. I think this one is easy to guess which would of taken place in Celes where Fai was still really young. You've really captured Fai's personality a lot! I look forward to the next update!
| Justice Tokidoki chapter 35 . 12/21/2013
Sheesh...Fai's past is so messed up. I hate acknowledging it sometimes because...it's just so dark. I really like twins so the fact that it only adds to the tragedy just makes it worse.
The imagery really stood out here. I liked how you described his nails while he was climbing and the way he tripped and his confusion afterwards. It was almost hard to seperate from the past to present but that's my only minor nitpick, as far as transitions go.
| Durbe the Barian chapter 35 . 12/18/2013
Wooooow. That looks interesting. What the heck happened?
| angelcat2865 chapter 35 . 12/17/2013
Very nicely done! and very sad that Fai could not understand Ashura's concern for him.
| Justice Tokidoki chapter 34 . 12/5/2013
Yeah...that's not something you see every day (Kurogane singing, obviously). I really like how you linked the two moments together, how aspects of a song can bring feelings of comfort and safety. Very well done.
Anyway, great chapter!
| Durbe the Barian chapter 34 . 12/1/2013
Kurogane SINGING?! I don't even want to THINK about it. I'd lose my image of him.
Okay. That actually makes sense. Ashura saved his neck again.
| angelcat2865 chapter 34 . 11/30/2013
Cool, love the idea of Kurgs singing a lullaby for Sakura.
Also love the idea of Ashura humming Fai to sheep when he was small and the tune being the one he uses to form the protective shield in Rekourt.
| Justice Tokidoki chapter 33 . 11/27/2013
Very rich snippets indeed. It definitely looks at the quiet, thoughtful moments that could have easily occurred during their journey but could get overlooked in the manga and, consequently, by the readers. I really liked the idea of music itself being universal and it shows that even when we can't understand what someone else is saying music can still reach out where words can not.
Haha, and Kurogane's reaction at the very end was the perfect comedic icing on the cake. Great work.
| angelcat2865 chapter 33 . 11/16/2013
| Justice Tokidoki chapter 32 . 11/1/2013
Great snippets here. Acid Tokyo for the first one and Ceres for the second one (you know, if we're still even doing the naming thing). I liked your interpretation of that scene where Syaoran betrays them all. It's a very poignant marker as far as how close everyone is to Fai at this point and time. And the last one was nice and light, perfect father/son bonding moment there.
| angelcat2865 chapter 32 . 11/1/2013
Great update as always! :-)