|Reviews for Heat of the Chase|
| Valenntine2000 chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
wow, that was a really intreaging story. it is hard to find the right word for it. I liked it it is just almost undesribable. it had good grammar and spelling anyways. you got some talent! thanks for this and please do make more stories! -
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
I like it! **
| Equality4Puppies chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
This was so great!
| Suhiki chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Hehehe, I love it! I have yet to read your other stories, but this one is also great! Makes me want more. Another story that makes you desire more. I love but blahh that in an author when they write their story. It's frustrating because it leaves you wanting more but good because it's a fitting ending!
| jj chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
second time reading this and i still lov it to death
| foxy girl chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
You really have a talent with fanfiction stories! I loved this! Now back to your page to read more. ;)
| Yugi's sister death chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Yuki:You should make a story out of this
Yumi: Yah! With mpreg!
Yugi: don't give them ideas!
| Mina-chan27 chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
It's been awhile since I read some Yugioh fanfiction and I'm pleased I chose this one in particular for I fairly liked it quite a bit I must say. Superb writing skills I must say. I have a fetish for ears and tails and this one sure got my imagination flying like a squirrell on crack.
| winged sapphire wolf chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
Holy f*ck! That was freaking good, no, great! Oooooooo! Great lemon!
| Heather Dehmer chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Late but...HAPPY B-DAY CANDYASSGOTH!
| GirlWhoHasNoName chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee look look LOOK my name is up there! *noob*
I am finally heeeeeere to read and review. SORRY FOR THE WAIT! Sorry again for the beta thingy... *epic fail*
NOW REVIEW TIME!
First off, Kimonini, yaoi, rut... what more do you want XDDD. LOVE IT! You are seriously a great writer. Had me hooked from beginning till end. Your descriptions, emotions and more are very good!
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Strong, confident, loner, attractive Yami. *dreamy sigh* Just the way we love him.
LOL The smart guy - purposely tracking infertile females. Smart man, smart.
YAAAAAAY! You made Yugi the foxy fox. I LOVE THAT!
Eeeeeeeee Yugi's enticing scent!
Eeeeeeeee Yugi's enticing show!
Poor Yami must be going ballistic right about now XD
LSDGHSKLHGSKLGS AND THE CHASE IS ON! Great work there with the whole scene. Kept most readers on their toes I'm sure of it. The intelligence, playing, toying, running, humour... oh I can go on and on. Just know you did well there with the whole scene man!
LOL! Begging Yami not to eat him XDDD. How ironically... approriate? He's gonna eat you alright.
AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA! I love Yami's methods of persuasion XDDD.
The wolf gave a decidedly foxy grin, : Your wordplay is just extraordinary! Your deeper humour is scattered throughout the whole chapter and I just absolutely LOVE it!
AAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHHAHA! Yami's one-two-three he pulled on Yugi had me laughing hard. So cute man.
Such a warm spicy scent was messing with his mind as the owner messed with his body : Once again, your wordplay rules. There are many more examples I can give you, but then my review will stretch as far as Pretoria. Just know I notice and love them
and the lemon... ehehehehee... well... It was hot!
LOL for a moment I thought Yami deserted Yugi. Thank goodness he didn't!
D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW! THAT WAS SOOOOOO CUTE AT THE ENDING WITH THE FOOD AND THE TOGETHERNESS AND AND...! You ended it on such a note that one can think that a) they will become partners now or b) they'll become rut-buddies... rut-buddies being my own created word. But, whichever it will be, they'll be seeing more of each other for sure!
I love happy endings! *wipes tear*
GREAT WORK! Nicely done, loved Yami, Yugi was so cute... very very very nice!
| jgrl68 chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
LOVED THIS STORY! it was a cool twist turning them to animals. Hope you make more stories like this! Also the snuggling morning after was so cute!
| Phoenix51 chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
That was AWESOME! Thanks for posting!
| Goshikku Hime wa Yami-san chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
D'aaaaaaaw! Soooo KAWAIII at the end of course! But ima kinda mad, I neva got a birthday storie present v.v...but good storie!
| CandyassGoth chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
KYAAAAAAA OMG DARLING THANK YOU!
Oh wow, WOW, ehehehehehehe when last I read a fic like this! And its Puzzleshipping asdfghjkl YAAAAAAAAAY!
Oh wow, I love the whole mating season and primal urges stuff, that's what most fanfiction is for, right? EEEEEH I love this! I can't even be angry at Yami for those times when he went after baren females, that's a damn good idea to pass the heats when you don't want puppies, HUH, AMAZING
Yugi as a fox? KYA! Imagine that tail! SO CUTE. Oh man, Yugi is slippery! He really gave Yami a chase. Go Yugi!
"My name's Yami. I'm a wolf and you are hot." So simple and yet so effective, that deserves an award XD I love it!
HOLYRA! H.O.L.Y RA. Wow, now that was a lemon! Man! I drooled all over my keyboard, and now my nightshirt, asdfafsdasdfgh yes yes yes! Amazing! Assertive confident Yami, adorable sexy uke Yugi omgomgomg om nom nom
AWWWW SO SAD AND CUTE AND ASDFAGS MY FEEEEELS! Yugi thought he'd been used and abandoned, why do I love that thought? And why do I spazz knowing Yami didn't abandon him? OMG SO COOL
Oh man, this was awesome hun! Seriously, you should definitely be proud, I was totally hooked! So sexy and sweet! KYAAAA. I really love, awesome job! Thank you for doing it, I really appreciate and love it! Definitely going to favs, and I'll be rereading this ASAp! *hugs* Thank you so much!