|Reviews for The Parts of the Sum|
| JDorsey314 chapter 46 . 10/28/2014
I like these plots where there are multiple sets of bad guys and some of them die. maybe that isn't really it... but something like that. anyway, this is a particularly good one.
| JDorsey314 chapter 45 . 10/28/2014
I enjoyed it. this one is particularly good. and I liked the tie in with the scene in the original series. what was it? book 6? I don't recall. that kind of thing makes fanfiction seem more real, I guess. more of a part of the original series.
| JDorsey314 chapter 44 . 10/28/2014
I like it.
| JDorsey314 chapter 39 . 10/28/2014
Woah Woah Woah! hold on a minute! "we are all in a pickle".
do you kiss your mother with that mouth? I'm sure she would prefer pickle breath to sex slang breath.
fingers, typing... nevermind. I think that bad lang detracts from this. Really I always think that when any swearing is used, but particularly now.
| JDorsey314 chapter 34 . 10/28/2014
This one was interesting! and I cannot think of any way it could be improved. It's just written that well.
| JDorsey314 chapter 33 . 10/28/2014
Gosh, people are rude. and very deliberately so. it must take a lot of effort to read the greatest fanfiction collection in existence and keep your mouth shut. pointless, too. so I will not do it. you're a great author! and your books are therefore great! I loved the new dawn. loved it.
| JDorsey314 chapter 32 . 10/28/2014
thank you for writing such great books, and thank you sweetbriar for thanking along with me. this stuff is good!
| JDorsey314 chapter 25 . 10/27/2014
| JDorsey314 chapter 24 . 10/27/2014
Actually, hawks do mate for life. the animorphs series gave me a fascination of hawks, which is now self sustaining, because hawks are interesting. I'm kind of a hawk researchy person now. and I can tell you with certainty that they mate for life. so, if this fact is not a major part of the plot, if you can remove it without damaging the story, you probably should.
aside from that, all of your fanfics are scientifically plausible and interesting. which is part of the reason I would want to help fix small problems such as these, whenever my help is acceptable.
| JDorsey314 chapter 18 . 10/27/2014
I have a new 3rd favorite verb. thank you for expanding my vocabulary!
| JDorsey314 chapter 15 . 10/27/2014
I like it. I like your fanfics. and I would usually wait untill the end to say that. the last chapter. what most people probably do. It depends on what I read in your A/N's. how you tell about 50 people reading and two reviewing. I guess it doesn't make much of a difference now, weather I post or not. maybe you only read comments on the fanfics you're working on, and not the ones that have been done for years. but if you write a good fanfic, you should know immediately. people should tell you. and so I do.
| Arn chapter 14 . 10/4/2014
If have to read the words "rachel go." Ever again im going arnold underwood on somebody s ass
| anon aristh chapter 4 . 10/4/2014
I would be more inclined to leave reviews if better than 2% actually posted to the boards
| Anon Aristh chapter 17 . 10/5/2014
Can i ask a personal favor can i a one shot alt ending to number six i think cassie should be forced to live with Arnold Underwood mind for the rest of her life. I swear itll be the cassies of this world that have us ending like the b$& & ass pemalites, (who got what they deserved antihubris who woulda thought)
| Anon Aristh chapter 16 . 10/5/2014
VPersonally i cant stand marco he should have been on the blade ship... Then again hed b to much of a punk to pull it off