Reviews for 5 Times the Team Thought Bart was Underweight
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12
this is amazing we need more stories like this!
fatnakedkitten chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
Awesome. Poor little darling.
Obsessivebookdiva chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
You need to work on your contractions, but besides that I enjoyed the story!
nightmare chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
for all the food he eats he's under weight!
Shojobaby chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
The way the team all cared for Bart was really sweet. I like it!

Now, I noticed two errors here. First, you used the wrong form of 'to.' If you meant 'to' meaning 'too much,' you need to use 'too.'

The second sentence in Jamie's part should say " It was too hot..." You also made that mistake in the beginning of Conner's section.

Next, the third section in Jamie's section ought to begin, " Bart and he..." Not him. That's the wrong pronoun case. Just FYI.

Anyway, I enjoyed reading this story. Good work!

God Bless You,

Shojobaby
bookworm chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Easy, he didn't have any food in the future! And he's a speedster.
Scotty1609 chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
d'aw... FLUFFIES!
colerfulldarkness666 chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
AAWW cutesy very much moremore