Reviews for The Winter Dorm
BelieverFrostyShipper chapter 5 . 2/21/2016
I'm interested adopting this story. :) and giving you all credit. BUT it would be awesome if you continued this story. And made chapter 5 and 6
Avatar Aang chapter 5 . 8/3/2014
Yeah an update xxxx great start sooooo wish you could elaborate on it xx sorry to hear its discontinuing awwwwwwwww (cries in corner) xxxxxxx
Dolla chapter 4 . 7/30/2014
Plzz continue it is amazing!
Guest chapter 4 . 7/6/2014
PippaFrost chapter 4 . 5/10/2014
Avatar Aang chapter 4 . 4/2/2014
More pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee write more please please please xxxxxx its great fantastic brilliant I wanna know what happens with bunny and pitch
Kayla chapter 4 . 10/17/2013
This is great, and I loved how you used '68 as the room number! So did Pitch have a mental break in this chapter or was he already like that? A creep that stalks families he like's and kill's them? Could Bunny's family not have been the only one's Pitch targeted? Will Pitch take an interest in Jack after a while? He's going to draw attention to himself by helping Bunny to stay away from Pitch, and seeing as Pitch killed all of Bunny's family and is a possible serial killer he's likely to look for new targets, right?

With Jack being attached to Bunny . . . . . . . it's not like one of those major hero crushes right? I can't picture Jack falling in love with Bunny simply because he saved him, at least not in a sincere way. More like how a small fluffy animal gets attached to a person they like. Not to say that I don't think Jack could have fallen in love with Bunny sincerely sense he met him, that I can imagine. I imagine that Sandy probably kept in touch with Jack because he knew that if he did develop feeling for Bunny they would be sincere. Which just makes me wonder: what about Jack's family? There must be a reason that Jack got so attached to Bunny right? If you don't really have anyone else in you life then it would be easy to get attached to someone that saved your life. Could Jack have been an orphan? Lost his family at a young age? Accident? Was it maybe just love at first sight if nothing else? Could Jack have seen him before that and wanted to be his friend? They must have lived or hung out around the same areas if Bunny ended up saving him. I'm going to enjoy finding out _
Fie chapter 4 . 10/7/2013
Asking aster to stay with a murder would be selfish
And jack isn't selfish

Also I'm sure Ur be great protection albino stick
Quill Scribblings chapter 4 . 8/16/2013
What fabulousness have I just stumbled upon? The chemistry between Jack and Aster is amazing, and Jack doesn't really seem all that creepy - apart from the stalking thing, he's not really a creepy guy. It's actually really sweet :)

Oh God, Pitch is just... Poor Bunny. Kangaroo. I can't believe that sick, son of a turnip is there, at Aster's college. It just makes my blood boil.

I'm greatly looking forward to the next chapter! I think each one is just the right size, as you don't seem to drag out one topic through loads of chapters (sorry, I think you mentioned something about chapter length before, and I just wanted to be sure). I love this story!
ItAllStartedwithAStory chapter 4 . 8/7/2013
OH MY GOH! PLEASE don't let it end here!
Michiru Kita chapter 4 . 7/25/2013
fav an follow.
i know youll deside in the future what happens to this story but i like it... and i really hope you continue it
michiru says over
Ren-chan Jinguji chapter 4 . 7/10/2013
Can't wait until the next chapter!

Some-GAY-ass-Nerd chapter 4 . 7/5/2013
Omg this story is brilliant Please update soon
FandomsandfeelsandshipsOHMY chapter 4 . 6/25/2013
Ilovesmiles4 chapter 4 . 6/16/2013
Absolutely awesome! Update soon.
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