|Reviews for Forbidden Fruit|
| Anastasia DeSilva chapter 26 . 2/15
I will be continuing the story in few weeks time. I have been away for the longest time due to some illness.
My apologies for leaving everyone hanging.
| Guest chapter 26 . 1/22
Is that the end of the story? Be
I like the story line but I definitely wanted to read more when ana and Christian are already dating.. they kiss only once and that's quite disappointed
| Rmoure chapter 26 . 1/1
So she said yes so it ends?
| Guest chapter 26 . 12/15/2016
Why bother writing to end in a cliffhanger
| jasmin reynoso chapter 26 . 8/28/2016
Ok it was good but I was expecting more you are a good writer but like I said an end is always a beginning you should try the continuation since the story just got interesting Ana has a temper that is not easy for Christian to handle so I think we would like to see if he changes a bit as we have seen him changing.
| jasmin reynoso chapter 23 . 8/28/2016
i think you should get them together like 5 chapters back
| jasmin reynoso chapter 20 . 8/27/2016
om gosh! are you kidding me ana hast say yes to Christian and Elena already wants her out, come on I mean if ana and Christian would have at least been intimate
| jasmin reynoso chapter 17 . 8/26/2016
Ok this is enough, all I'm saying is please make this a to be continue because I have the feeling that it's going to be incomplete and the reader always wants more, yea and by reader at this moment I'm talking not only about me but others to you are a good writer but you must remember that the end is nothing but the beginning of an amazing story
| jasmin reynoso chapter 15 . 8/26/2016
ok now your just torturing the readers
I mean really they are both going through. hell cause they love each other and everyone needs a chance in life and love
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/26/2016
omg if they don't end up together I'm going to be pissed
| robertsmom chapter 26 . 8/8/2016
Excellent story. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Wonder if Elena and Hyde will begin working together.
| Violet chapter 26 . 6/26/2016
I am certainly loving all of your stories but they are cut
short before Christian and Anastasia actually make love
or get together as a proper couple, can't wait to read
more waiting anxiously.
| Guest chapter 26 . 6/14/2016
Please continue the story
| robyn odei-ntiri chapter 26 . 6/3/2016
New reader to your story...very interesting...I like thus Ana very stubborn...I hope Elena gets hers soon
...well done..I hope you update again...I'd like to know howit all turns out
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/29/2016