Reviews for Fiona and Marshall Lee Love or Lust?
Kaori chapter 1 . 5/8
That was
XD chapter 1 . 4/22
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25
Nice3 Hot and sexy I loved it! There were a few misspellings but they can be dismissed, you're ok, babe. It was nicely written, showing good detail and didn't go too fast. Make chapter 2 soon x
victoria chapter 1 . 2/6
soooooooooooooo hotttttttttt.
Marshall Lee Red chapter 1 . 1/19
Umm... This is a lot of misspelling and sorry, but the sex scenes escalated way too quickly. Not only that, but Fiona wouldn't just give it up that easily. It made no sense.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15
That Chapter was awesome can't wait to read chapter two!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12
...learn to spell... and don't ':D YAY' me
guest chapter 1 . 1/6
Some of these comments are so funny I keep coming back here and reading them. XD
samwinchesterissexy chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
Yeah this was awesome!
guest chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
Hey, I am all for a good lust story, but got dang, there was no love whatsoever in that. Also, you are an awesome storyteller; you kept me reading it but try to build a moment to that point.
Fiona and Marsha chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
well... this was disturbing. nicely written though, I wrote a book about stalkers and I never really put in dirty stuff because it sounded so gross and I couldn't help but laugh. So when I read this I guess you could say that I was laughing the whole way through! I liked this fan fiction though, It's true I did laugh but only because of the dirty language not because of the material. Once again, this was written nicely and I would like to read chapter 2.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
fuck? this was horrible
hjjh chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
omg... LOVE OR LUST!? Finn is like i think maybe 13 or 16 so that means fiona is about 13 or 16? OMG SO PAEEEEDO! PLUS MARSHALL LIKE A TOUSAND YEARS OLD! PAEDO BEAR!
LillyGoth chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
Um, let me point out that you spelt tongue wrong. What's a tong?
Hadasah Sherrill chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
That was STUPID! I though I was going to read a nice clean Adventure Time story but, it was dirty and sinnful! What if little kids get on here and read this TRASH?! I SHOULD REPORT THIS TO THE POLICE! I MEAN, AT LEAST USE COMMON SINCE PERSON! YOU SHOULD GO TO HELL AND BURN! But, I am a christain so... MAY GOD BLESS YOU!
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