|Reviews for Fiona and Marshall Lee Love or Lust?|
| Kaori chapter 1 . 5/8
That was fantastical...just...wow.
| XD chapter 1 . 4/22
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/25
Nice3 Hot and sexy I loved it! There were a few misspellings but they can be dismissed, you're ok, babe. It was nicely written, showing good detail and didn't go too fast. Make chapter 2 soon x
| victoria chapter 1 . 2/6
| Marshall Lee Red chapter 1 . 1/19
Umm... This is a lot of misspelling and sorry, but the sex scenes escalated way too quickly. Not only that, but Fiona wouldn't just give it up that easily. It made no sense.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/15
That Chapter was awesome can't wait to read chapter two!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/12
...learn to spell... and don't ':D YAY' me
| guest chapter 1 . 1/6
Some of these comments are so funny I keep coming back here and reading them. XD
| samwinchesterissexy chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
Yeah this was awesome!
| guest chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
Hey, I am all for a good lust story, but got dang, there was no love whatsoever in that. Also, you are an awesome storyteller; you kept me reading it but try to build a moment to that point.
| Fiona and Marsha chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
well... this was disturbing. nicely written though, I wrote a book about stalkers and I never really put in dirty stuff because it sounded so gross and I couldn't help but laugh. So when I read this I guess you could say that I was laughing the whole way through! I liked this fan fiction though, It's true I did laugh but only because of the dirty language not because of the material. Once again, this was written nicely and I would like to read chapter 2.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
fuck? this was horrible
| hjjh chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
omg... LOVE OR LUST!? Finn is like i think maybe 13 or 16 so that means fiona is about 13 or 16? OMG SO PAEEEEDO! PLUS MARSHALL LIKE A TOUSAND YEARS OLD! PAEDO BEAR!
| LillyGoth chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
Um, let me point out that you spelt tongue wrong. What's a tong?
| Hadasah Sherrill chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
That was STUPID! I though I was going to read a nice clean Adventure Time story but, it was dirty and sinnful! What if little kids get on here and read this TRASH?! I SHOULD REPORT THIS TO THE POLICE! I MEAN, AT LEAST USE COMMON SINCE PERSON! YOU SHOULD GO TO HELL AND BURN! But, I am a christain so... MAY GOD BLESS YOU!