Reviews for Broken Glass to Sweep Away
ForgottenDreamer98 chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
Is this going to be continued? I sure hope so :) its too good to be a one-shot so update soon!

-Ace
hisokauzumaki chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
More please!
MysteryFury chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
creepy... but I like it
Thaliag.2 chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
This was incredibly well written. I enjoyed your use of detail and can't wait to read more.
SlaughterOtter chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
I can hardly wait until the next chapter! I like your characterizations.
nickyx3 chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
Oh ho ho...the torture begins muahahaah *coughs* erm right, do excuse my sadistic side coming out...anyways update soon! Jack/Pitch whichever the way they're portrayed, needs more love xD
Wolf Girl chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Soon as I saw torture I hit it. And I regret nothing! This is really good, don't stop!
SherlokiPotter chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
This is really good :) Please continue
Riana1 chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
God, you are so good.
XxSpiritWolfxX chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
please continue
isthisparadise chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Very interesting beginning! I love it! I can't wait for more!
Andy chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Ohhhh I like it very much so far. You write it well. Keep it up!
blackkyu chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Oh my, so Pitch is going to use the fear Jack generates as a power source? So does that mean Jacks feelings (or heart) is special in some way?
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