Eeeeeeeeeeeeep. Not nice. Not nice at all.

This... this... it's so refreshingly evil, so very dark and morbid, and it has Pitch written all over it! Good job with the writing, it sounds really sophisticated...

OH MY GOODNESS.
Mental torture. Angst and tragedy. So well executed. Everything you wrote here was marvelous. Exciting. There wasn't one single word to dislike. This whole fanfic is a masterpiece.
I only got to read this by chance, this fic was recommended to me by a friend. And it did not disappoint one bit.
I did not check any data, this is probably an old fic. Probably abandoned. It makes me sad.
I won't hope for what's most likely not there, but instead thank you for writing and publishing this. It was a wonderful experience, reading this.

Will there be a new chapter? :)

did they save him, then? cus I kinda didn't get it at the end, but I think they did, maybe,

Update, I command you. O_O

Recognized the title, but couldn't quite place it. The opening quotes alone broke my heart. Frost is one of my favorites (what a delightful coincidence, I will have to remember that in the future), and those excepts were so tastefully and casually dropped. Such simple phrases have no right to be that horrifically foreboding.
You win. Well done.

Daym Pitch is sassy... You've portrayed him perfectly, by the way :)
Can't wait to see what happens next- he seems so sure of himself, I get the feeling his has something else planned...

Oh man, I am so excited to read what happens after... This intro was written perfectly and I'm very impressed :3

You can't leave it there! There must be a sequel right?! Right?!

You wrote this really well. The way time passed was not jagged or boring. Each moment portrayed pushed the plot along. You disn't drag ir out or provide unnecessary details. The thought process provided for Jack was deep and intense in a way that was entralling.

Now write a sequel. Please...

Ouch. Interesting. I can totally see Pitch doing this. And it working. Yikes. Thanks for the story!

This is an amazing story. Don't leave it there . It must be continued

Oh god, I haven't read a story that made me cry like this in a long time. I love, adore and worship the way you write. I tried to think of any different ways of breaking Jack but I had never thought of this one and IT IS HORRIBLE! I could feel every single moment of Jack's solitude and I had shivers running my back all the time. Terrifyingly beautiful.
Although I think that a sequel would be awesome I think that it is for the best that you left it here. I cannot imagine the amount of confussion Jack would be in the middle of a battle like that but judging from his though in the Lair, I wouldn't be very surpised if he lost himself completely after it's over.

Simply wonderful. Please keep writing stories like that.

Come on! Sequal! That was a cliff hanger to me! :) you could do a lot with this. :D

What dats it?! *cries* I loved it!