Reviews for Super smash bros Online
TheMultiColoredPencil chapter 1 . 12/31/2013

Name: Maxine Greene
Looks: Hazel eyes, pale with freckles, shoulder length black hair, thin
Personality: Tomboy. Cold and sarcastic, but when gets close to people she is kind but still sarcastic.
Likes/Dislikes: Likes Grape soda, popcorn. Dislikes hyperactive and talkative people, too many people.
Nationality: American.
Favorite Games: Legend of Zelda, Animal Crossing, SSB and SSBB, Professor Layton.
Consoles/Handhelds owned: Wii, WiiU, 3DS
Bio: She lives with her aunt after her family died. Her aunt tends to spoil her, though Maxine does not like it. After her parents died, Maxine became cold and hates herself because she feels their death is her fault.
Username: FantasyGirl122
Species: Human
Avatar’s looks: Looks like Maxine and wears black version of female wii fit trainer ‘s clothes.
Weapons: Katana
XTheBluePhoenix chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
Name: Marina Huang

Looks: Long brown hair tied in a loose ponytail, brown eyes, pale skin. 17 years old and 5'6''. Wears a white shirt underneath a red vest, brown cargo pants and brown boots.

Personality: Very bright and clever but mostly uses if for her mischeif and outspoken. However, under any serious situation, her attitude changes to a serious one.

Likes/Dislikes: Causing mischeif, pulling pranks, eating food, playing music and being in the outdoors a lot. She dislikes anyone bugging her or making mad, doing anything chore related and anything that wastes her time.

Nationality: Chinese-American

Favorite games: Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess, Sonic Generations, New Super Mario Bros, Legend of Zelda: Phantom Hour Glass, and Star Fox Assault

Consoles/handhelds owned: Wii, DSi, and a GameCube

Bio: Marina is a Junior in high school who typically has the high grades but is a tomboy and a gamer. She really doesn't like being friends with girls who are the complete opposite of her but has one or two to remind her sometimes that she's a girl herself. Even if she's known in school, her parents usually work which makes her the way she is.


Species: Human

Avatar's looks: Has short black hair, dark brown eyes. Wears a long sleeved, turtle neck shirt, black skinny jeans, and white converse.

Weapons: Her main weapon is a wushu staff used towards opponents in mid range, has a few small knives for long range like throwing them, but other than that, she uses her wushu skills for hand to hand combat towards her enemies.

PM me for any questions and stuff.
maxblade10 chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
mind if I be in bro ok

Name:max blade

looks:13 years old/blue eyes/blue spikey hair/white skin/blue shoes/blue pants/white shirt/cut jacket

personality: mostly goofy and foolish but can be smart and serious sometimes

likes/Dislikes:loves food but doesn't gain weight or get bigger when i mean big i mean fat and doesn't like waking up,loves video games never gets tired of them and when someone is right in front of him he doesn't care he still plays and hates bugs loves chocolate really much and likes swimming


favorite games: SSBB/sonic generations/jak and daxter/new super mario bros wii/digimon.

consoles/handhelds owned: 3Ds/wii/playstation 2/ds lite/dsi and dsi XL.

Bio: He's a video game addict and never stops playing. He wants a 3Ds XL but his parents never give him money because they think he was spoiled as a kid. when he found out about SSB Online he said "WOOO!LETS-A GO!GOTTA GO FAST-FASTA-FASTA-FASTERFASTERFASTER!"...nobody understands him at times...

username: Maxblade10


avatars looks: barcelona training suit has black hair hazel eyes blue and red shoes 13 years old

weapons:hes a living weapon(shape shifter)

this is gonna be soooooooo cooolll
DimmysEpicGoat chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Name: Mia
Looks: Brown hair in a ponytail, brown eyes. Rown dress sililmar to Ink's, and wears brown boots.
Personality: Link is her role model, but she thinks villians PWN the others. She is nice to people who are nice to her, has a short temper, and is a bsicly nice person.
Likes: Villians, winn ing, being praised.
Dislikes: Clowns, spiders, stuck up people.
Nationality: America
Fave Games: SSBB, Super Paper Mario, Paper Mario, A Legend of Zelda.
Cinsoles: Wii
Bio: Mia is a girl who lives in a rich family and has always admirered Link. She took archery lessons and dressed like him to show her loyalty. When SSB online came out, she could not wait to play it.
Username: Mia
Species: Human
Avatar's Looks: See Ooks.
Weapons: Arrows, bombs, dagger.
Hope she makes it!
mystery8icarus chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Name: Vivi Azul

Looks: Light blue hair tied in a low ponytail, with her bangs covering one eye, with blue eyes, and slightly pale skin. Wears black long sleeved undershirt with blue t shirt, black jeans, and black hunting boots with blue fingerless gloves.

Personality: Quiet, very shy but very kind and friendly. She will stand for what she thinks is right, but is sometimes blunt with things.

Likes/dislikes: She likes music, any that expresses feeling, reading, the internet, writing, and chocolate. Not to mention video games. She hates people who do evil things, like crime, when she's cold, and bugs.

Nationality: Um... Mexican-American, if that's what u mean.

Favorite games: Kingdom Hearts, Super Smash Bros., Kid Icarus, Sonic the Hedgehog, and Legend of Zelda.

Consoles/handhelds owned: Nintendo DS Lite, Nintendo 3DS


Username: QuietbutLoud

Species: Altean

Avatar's looks: a sea salt ice cream bar, if that's what u mean.

Weapons: Pair of purple razor sharp fans

Hope u accept her!
Wolf Eared Girl chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Name: Maya Elise M. Spade

Looks: Age-13-15
Eye Color-Dark Chocolate
Hair-Black and shoulder length
Skin-Milk Chocolate/ Dark spots due to Eczema or scars. Beauty mark on right cheek
Shoe size-10 (womens)
Figure/build-Curvy/ chubby.

Personality: Protective, sarcastic, quite, naïve, stubborn, dramatic, loner, socially awkward, street attitude when being challenged, humorous.

Likes/Dislikes: Likes: Sweet/Spicy food, teamwork, writing, markers, Owl City, music, electronics, stripes, plaid, funny people, internet memes, and her i-Pad.
Dislikes: Fakers, peanut butter, boy bands, cheesy pickup lines, humid days, skirts, blood/gore, trolls, and stereotypes.

Nationality: African American/Black

Favorite games:(5 or less) Dance Central 2-3, Portal 2, Soul Calibur 4, and Sonic Adventure 2 Battle.

Consoles/handhelds owned:(any of Nintendo's consoles/handhelds...Don't say all...) Nintendo DS Light, Nintendo GameCube, and Nintendo Wii (..I guess her iPad doesn't count but it's something she has soo...-shrug-)

Bio: Maya is a student in 8th grade, she specializes in art and music. She is friends with Kayla who has been there since 5th grade, Maya's favorite classes are art, music, and English. She is an A/B student. When she began her 8th grade year she was pulled into Brawl.

Username:(your avatar's name(or your Fan fiction username) Wolf Eared Girl

Species:(any species of the smashers) Human

Avatar's looks: A girl (Maya) with a neon and purple hoodie, wolf tail and ears included.

Weapons:(a made up weapon...or a smashers(also 3 or less)) Her 3 summoning cards.
PACTO Cards: Tier (Beast): Defense and flame, Kaze (Wind, Ghost): Distraction and Air, and Luna (moon): Offence and Wind.

If you have any other questions about my character please message me! :)

Wolf Eared Girl
WrittenWithPencils chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Name: Grizzly Jazz.

Looks: 16 years old. Thin 5'4 caucasian male with dark brown hair (short and spiky) and eyes of the same color, with dark circles underneath. Attire consists of a white t-shirt under a black thin jacket, green jeans and black shoes. Often seen w/ a styrofoam coffee cup.

Personality: A generally calmer and somewhat stressful and anxious teenager. Grizzly is more likely to engage in conversations about a number of things, but video games isn't at the top of that list. Regardless, he loves games.

Likes/Dislikes: Electronic music, Coffee, and a day without headaches go on the likes list. As for dislikes, they are headaches, nostalgia, whining/complaining and hypocrisy.

Consoles and Handhelds owned: Nintendo Gamecube, DS Lite, Wii and Wii U.

Bio: Grew up in a small town called Northpoint. Recently informed about an online game for Super Smash Brothers, Grizzly grabs his coffee and jacket and heads straight forward into the game.

Username: JazzHearts.

Species: Human.

Avatar Looks: JazzHearts is a mysterious teenager. Dressed in a white dress shirt with a black tie, jeans, black shoes and metallic, skeleton like black gloves. His dark hair lies above a metallic mask with small pistons on the side where the jaw bones are located. A design resembling a sharp-tooth filled mouth is carved into where his lips would be and a cyan visor covers the rest.

Weapons: JazzHearts fights with the help of an odd, disembodied smile and pupiless eyes that can confuse and mess with the players head, leaving them open for an attack by JazzHearts who uses simple melee moves. The face identifies itself as 'Jarvis' for an unknown reason.

Anything else, well, you know how to reach me.

MetallicaKnight chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Hereeee you go :)
Name: Lucina Knight ( my version of Lucina from the new fire emblem)
Aviator Name: MetallicaKnight (same as my username)
Gender: Female
Nationality: American
Species: Altean
Age: 18
Height: 5'9
Weight: 110 lb
Occupation(?): Mercenary/bounty hunter

Eye Color: Navy Blue but changes on visible mood. Mark of Naga on right eye and tries to hide it.
Hair color: Black with red highlights or Navy mid back length hair. Sometimes ties it up in a Samus ponytail
Skin Color:
Misc appearance: Has a big scar that looks like a butterfly on her back and smaller various scars. Tall and thin. Very agile and athletic. Looks serious but pretty.
Avatar: Looks the same but no little various scars only the big one
Favorite Food: Pastries, bread, and Alcohol.

Personalities: Cold and manipulating and then nicer if you know her. Sarcastic and short tempered.
Bio: She was training since she was born to be deadly, but, she was almost raped and suffered emotional abuse, she learn to block this out though for only short periods of time. Though will break down a lot . She is also a mercenary and will do any job if it's reasonable and for a good amount of money. Earned has earned a fortune from that. She now lives with either Metaknight or Samus depending.

Signature Clothes/Costume: white mid length dress with a corset on the outside, black tights and huntress like knee high boots.
Summer: Short Shorts, tank tops/t-Shirts, and sandals
Fall: Button up shirts, skinny jeans/short shorts with tights, and vans/athletic shoes. Sometimes a jacket.
Winter: Uggs/boots, skinny jeans, tank top, warm sweater, and a winter coat.
Spring: Dresslike shirt, skinny jeans or shorts, and sandals/shoes
Swimming: A navy bikini with white butterflies.
Formal: A navy strapless black dress that goes above the knees and has white butterflies and a black sash on the waist and stilettos.

Weapons: Can summon weapons and armor from memory.
Wields the new falchion and bow and arrows.
Fighting Style: Uses speed rather than strength to her advantage.

Misc: like hanging out with Samus, Ness, Wolf, Kirby, Metaknight, and Ike.
Tries to hook Ike and Samus sometimes.
Plays Violin, guitar, and piano when she's bored and learns new songs on it
If she's super bored she'll try new things and practice doing that thing until she's good at it (helps on odd jobs)
Sleeps on her stomach and with her cape as a blanket and uses a bow and arrow bag as a pillow.
Favorite Game: All the Metroid games, animal crossing, Super Smash Bros series, and Legend of Zelda Series. Also enjoys fast paced games
Game Consoles/handheld: DS, DSi, 3DS, Wii, and WiiU. Other game systems she has to borrow from friends.

Weaknesses: A emotionally unstable due to emotional abuse and almost rape when younger.
Not as strong as fast.
Can be a little stubborn and persistent.
Hates whores, wannabes, and "playas" and think they should be more real and respect love
She can't take insults very well and has a temper.
Afraid of haunted houses and paranoid at times