Reviews for Kaleidoscope
lionesspuma chapter 2 . 2/26/2013
Interesting beginning but the grammar issues and misspelled/wrong words, make parts of it hard to read. Also... does Q have a pain/blood fetish? Digging a bullet out is going to be incredibly painful especially with a pocket knife. With just awakened nerves from the hot water of the shower it would be even MORE painful and bloody.

I do like your imagery. You have talent it needs some refining and more research.
tamara chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
I love it ! I can't wait the next ! Love the action ! So next please ! :)
alm1067 chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
I like it, an adventure. LOL