Reviews for Heatwave
Soultaker5ds chapter 10 . 3/2
I like your writing tho TTTT
Mitsuiki Haruka chapter 6 . 1/17
what happens next?!
RectalTenesmus chapter 1 . 1/8
I'm going to be honest, this story is bad. REAL bad. The chapters were short and updates were far apart, there was no development of a relationship, Gray just kinda kissed him then the story just stopped. Also it makes no sense that Natsu can eat God-Slayer flames, but can't handle 100 degree weather.
Haiiz chapter 9 . 6/30/2013
MAKE MORE PLASE and PLEASE make them longer chapters so i can get away from my cousins on the 4th of July (going 2 a family cook-out thats y) cause i hate them and they hate me so plz make more so i can get away from them D:
Akatsuki Fatale chapter 9 . 5/27/2013
Please update again! I need more!
Lunawerewolfy chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
It's just a bit strange that Natsu would get I'll from the heat. I would've thought Gray would since he's and Ice Mage. And Natsu literally eats fire for breakfast. You might want to change it to a cold wave (?) or swap the characters around, but then you'd have to rewrite the whole thing. Good though.
Graffiti-Kami chapter 8 . 3/21/2013
Aw! Natsu is blushin'
Graffiti-Kami chapter 7 . 3/21/2013
What the heck?! Another cliffhanger?! You have got to be kidding me!
Graffiti-Kami chapter 6 . 3/21/2013
Wow. Cliffhanger...
Graffiti-Kami chapter 5 . 3/21/2013
AW! Look at Gray having emotional problems in the middle of a bigger situation...
Graffiti-Kami chapter 4 . 3/21/2013
What up wit the super short chapter? Don't worry Natsu! If you fall, you'll have to hit rock bottom eventually!
Graffiti-Kami chapter 3 . 3/21/2013
No! Natsu you have to stay awake! DO. NOT. GO. TOWARDS. THE. LIGHT!
Graffiti-Kami chapter 2 . 3/21/2013
By the time Gray is done cooling down Natsu, he'll probably be wiped out.
Graffiti-Kami chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Wah! I hope Natsu is okay! Gray is so awesome.
theabridgedkuriboh chapter 8 . 3/2/2013
0_0 holy shit i miss the updates and now i missed this holy shit i need to follow this
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