Reviews for Say You Won't Go
4223marilyn chapter 1 . 4/11
This was sooo good! I loved it sooo much :D
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25
Yeah ok, first of all i don't like this. Aside from the fact its nasty, raven is strong and independent. I hate how she is shown in this. Grrr its not even sexy at all and i don't even like lemons! She sure as hell can support herself, what with her powers and all. And her powers! where were they? She is so weak and awkward in this i absolutely hated this. Sorry but thats the truth. I hate people who spend time on porn. I only look this shit up to give people like you a word of advise. GET A LIFE. get off the fucking couch and maybe you'll stop writing this shit. BTW, I'm 12 and i know u don't know me so shut the hell up about your opinion. There are no words to describe how awful this is, and how sinful this is, And honey I'm a jew! Last but not least... can you even spell! Learn before you write stupid! ):(
rockergirl4 chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
It's so sweet
LW12 chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
very nice
BartWLewis chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Thats was a nice story. "I already bought you the ring." haha that was good.
Master-of-the-Red-Dragons chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
i love this story
hiphop13Nevermore chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
This was a very clever one-shot.
Although I did notice some slight grammar and spelling errors, there weren't so many that it made the entire piece into shit. Trust me, some people do that.
This is something very like what I am planning to do. Like, but not exactly...
I would love it if you read my stories!
Thank you for this entertaining story. :)
MothersLilRaeRae chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
Aww :) like you writing style. Do continue with stories. One comment though, try breaking some paragraphs up more a bit. A little hard to read when everything's so close.
DarkKitKat chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Other than some confusing he/she moments great one-shot ;D