Reviews for Through the Looking Glass
Moony chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
Wow, I love this. You took a scene that not a lot of people read into more and gave it a depth. I especially love the backstory with Carl Powers. It makes me sad Moriarty is gone, and extremely angry with Mycroft. He's who broke him, right? I think Mycroft is the true villain here. Feels :,(
rabbit keys chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
This was pretty cool. I will be reading the companion to this, Mirrors, next.
crimeson-plasma chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Wow, I absolutely loved it! Please write more for these two soon :3
anon chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Not bad. A bit anti climatic toward the end. It seems as if you put a great deal of effort into describing the physical state of Moriarty, but you neglected to address the reasoning behind his decline, and you haven't really explored why Sherlock wasn't prepared to die for Moriarty.
I think it would benefit your writing if you were to look into the motivations and emotional states of the characters, rather than focussing solely on what is physically happening.
phanpiggy chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Fabulous! Really great writing and a unique take on the roof scene!