Reviews for Potions
dcdc123 chapter 4 . 1/3/2015
dcdc123 chapter 3 . 1/3/2015
dcdc123 chapter 2 . 1/3/2015
dcdc123 chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
Kanna Raimi chapter 4 . 12/27/2014
Shirubagure chapter 4 . 4/11/2013
I actually loved this. xD Not much of yaoi fan but I liked this one.
drmona lord chapter 4 . 4/11/2013
so far you storys are funny cant wait for more
just throwing an idea bone
how about a potion that shrinks kanda to the size of a mouse lol
mitsuyo-chan chapter 4 . 4/11/2013
I've always knew that everybody loves Allen XD
PoisonousDemon chapter 4 . 4/11/2013
I love this chapter
Maybe as an idea, allen and kanda switch bodies, i hope it is usefull
samwise1327 chapter 3 . 3/1/2013
Haha, loved it. Hmm.. Maybe you could have a chapter where Allen and Kanda are already together and the potion does something bad to Allen to bring out Kanda's soft side. Great chappy!
Yullen22490 chapter 3 . 2/28/2013
Great please update more
mitsuyo-chan chapter 3 . 2/27/2013
Oh Gosh, Allen is cute enough as an adult. But a kid? Soo cuutee! XD
PoisonousDemon chapter 3 . 2/27/2013
is this always going to be a oneshot ending with a kiss
i love this story
yaoiprincess101 chapter 3 . 2/27/2013
Daaaaaw. Toddler Allen.
dragonmunchies chapter 2 . 2/18/2013
so i was handwashing dishes and thinking about this, and came up with a few ideas...
1. a potion that makes somebody speak only in piglatin, or even backwards! like, hey becomes yeh and what becomes tahw, y'know? or it could make it so they can't speak!
2. it's been done before, but as far as i can tell only to allen. so make kanda turn into a girl 8D
3. i know you already turned kanda into a full cat, so why not turn allen into a full dog!
4. and then another potion can give allen kitty ears and tail (there are sooooo many stories with neco-allen o _ o) , while in the same story kanda gets dog ears and tail! you could just as easily have this be two separate stories, though.
5. and i know that a potion turned kanda and lavi into kids in the canon manga, so you could have either allen or kanda turn into a kid!
6. hmmmm oooh! what about wings! owo that could be cool!
7. ooh, instead of kid sized, you have a potion make one of them timcanpy/palm-sized! (i'm beginning to run out of ideas, but i'm going to try for a nice even ten.)
8. oh how about a potion that makes it so that one of them can't walk... omg that would be like... do you realize how ironic that would be? if allen WALKer couldn't WALK anymore(or at least for a while)? O _ O
9. oooooh, how about a potion that makes it so that they could literally walk on the walls or even the ceiling!
10. merman allen has been done many times before, too, so make kanda a merman this time! : 3 (man, i'm on a roll all of a sudden! i might just see if i can take this to fifteen! owo)
11. erm... personality switching potion? that could be interesting. and possibly a bit creepy. a polite, smiling kanda? * shudders *
12. ooh. a pheromone boosting potion! give that one to allen! then everyone would be blushing and stuttering and falling all over themselves and it's quite possible that there could be some nosebleeds and allen would just be all like wtf is going on while kanda would just be like the fuck if i know and be seemingly unaffected, meanwhile underneath the surface he's a raging ball of jealousy or something XD
13. ah, what if a potion immobilized somebody's arms?
14. invisibility ! or at least less - than - normal - visibility!
15. and the only other things i can think of is pyrokinesis or telekinesis, the first being the ability to light things on fire with your mind and / or emotions, the second being the ability to move things with your mind and / or emotions
wow, that's like... a whole lotta potion ideas. have fun with them C8
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