Reviews for Adagio
Lil'MissEya chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
That was so... asdfghjkl;;
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crazyemeralddragons chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Congrats, you made me cry. Not many fics can make me do that. The musical terms were a very nice touch, especially since the world of TotA is so music-oriented.
GreenNereid chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Wow! This is beautifully written. Awesome for everyone grieving over Ion.
Penguin Pop chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Very nice. The musical terms were used well, and I especially loved the part about forgiveness.
selenia-sopheria chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
I was THIS close to tears. That's marvelous, considering the only time I cry when looking at fiction is when I watch it on a screen.
OmegaStarShooter14 chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
You're trying to make my cry, aren't you? ;-;
MewSayuriWafujihara Mutomancer chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
I love this. It is beautifully written and I love the emotion and everything. I think it's absolutely wonderful.
Wild Tempest chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
Good use of emotion! It was nice to get inside of Florian's head for once. Very realistic take on how his death scene played out through his eyes. But I did notice some pitfalls: You use language that most readers aren't familiar with, i.e musical terms. They could throw people off. The summary should be rewritten for starters. And the ending was anti-climatic. It's choppy and doesn't flow like the rest of the story. You may have added it for effect, but ti didn't work for me.

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