Absolutely Amazing! i loved all of the parts you wrote!

Loved reading the parts that you wrote, but I understand why you made this choice, and I totally respect it. It also probably wouldn't be as good if you weren't as passionate about it than when you first started, so it is all good, and it is all about how much you want to write it or not anyways. Just know, if you ever decide to write anything else here on ffn you have a loyal reader behind you.

Awwwwwwww...but I just started reading this...guess I'm like 5 years late...oh well...

That was quite possibly the best Fourtris thing I've ever read (besides, ya know, the actual books) So sweet and awesome and I was grinning the whole time..Translation: I loved it, it's great!

I live in Chicago To!

Great chapter.

I liked the chapter.

Update soon please xxxx

Hi ! I loooooove your story ! You have a vivid imagination and it's really cool. I'm sorry for the mistakes, I'm Frensh and I do not usually write in English. :)

Okay. I like the fact that you used an original idea here, not the "fourtris happily ever after" concept that most people seem to use since Allegiant came out. Seems really good...I like how you incorporated parts of Divergent (like the altered scene where Tobias is hurt, instead of Tris) into the story flawlessly. I like your ideas. I am going to start a fan fic called "when I wake" that takes place after Allegiant...prologue and first chapter will be up in a few days. Thanks, I really like your story.

love it. it's good. can u finish it?

That was so nice. It was really relaxing and care free especially since I'm reading this at 5 in the morrning. U r da llc need to get a life. Oh well!

That was possibly the sweetest thing iv ever reat in my entire life.

Omg this story is really good I'm loving it so far!

Nice chapter! I'm glad to see you updating this story again.