Reviews for Umbra, the phantom hero
Nightshade6265 chapter 16 . 3/28
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
KodiakWolfe13 chapter 16 . 3/28
YES! THAT IS A SEQUEL I WILL BE ABLE TO READ! IM SO EXCITED! I HOPE TO SEE THE SEQUEL! I RE-READ THIS NOT TOO LONG AGO AND NOW I GET A SEQUEL! YIP-EE! ILL TELL ALL MY FRIENDS! Wait... I have no friends who are on Fanfiction... ILL TELL THEM ANYWAYS! THEY HEAR ME YAMMER ALL THE TIME SO YEAH!

-KW13

P.S. DID I MENTION IM EXCITED?

P.S. On average DAILY, 12 newborns will be given to the wrong parents-... O.O Oh God...
16ckelmen chapter 16 . 3/27
AAAAAAHHHHHH! No! No! NO!
SHE not he. She as in girl.
hehe,
can't wait for the sequel by the way! :D
16ckelmen chapter 15 . 3/25
The End!
NOT!
unheard to everyone...
... alive!
Desiree whom was floating nearby after finally escaping the ghost zone from a temporary portal that had appeared smiled sinisterly. "So you have wished it, so it shall be," She whispered as her magic drifted over too Danny. Now messing with such a simple wish is nearly impossible, so she did the next best thing. Although he would be happy that doesn't mean he'll be living an easy life. matter of fact, as desiree's smile widened, she thought of all the ways she could ruin his life. The options were limitless. Destruction of his world, stealing his memories(again), taking him to another universe. Oh, how she was gonna have fun. Desiree slipped away just as Danny's ghost sense went off...
...Sam looked around. Jump City a sign nearby said. A pinkish purple magic smoked away from her.
The End...
Is just the beginning...
luna chapter 12 . 1/28
Is it just me or is the GiW full of idiots?
Sehkmet chapter 4 . 9/28/2013
My. How noble and long suffering Danny is. He is also apparently willing to spill all his secrets if someone asks him about it. I never before realized how open and honest Danny is, willing to tell complete strangers about his deepest secrets.
RLargey chapter 9 . 9/16/2013
Dude Umbra is Latin for shadow not phantom
Bashirisuku chapter 15 . 9/3/2013
Sweet last chapter, and good story to.
Jamie Phantom chapter 15 . 9/2/2013
Awwwww! So sweet! I loved this story alot. Its very sweet, intrigueing, adventerous, and mysterious. It has a wonderful twist to the danny phantom and teen titans story. Keep writinh!
Guest chapter 15 . 8/2/2013
By All Thats Holy... this story is beyond awesome. The characters, how the story flows. Man, sorta wished it were longer just so i can continue reading it. You sir/ma'am are a awesome writer. Sorta hoping theres a sequel. but seeing that there is no mention of it that is unlikely. will most likely reread it again in the future because of its awesomeness.
Kairia'sYami chapter 15 . 7/13/2013
Aw, that's so sweet! ,
Guest chapter 9 . 6/12/2013
Wow... This very much so reminds me of my grandma dying. She had a horrid cause of lung cancer. We couldn't do anything about, I promised her that when she got better, we would go shopping together. That never came, she died in the Summer and now it is my second favorite season. I loved the Summer because we had so much fun, but now, whenever it is Summer, near the time of her death, I just cry in my bed till I go to sleep. My parents never hear it, so I can just let it out. Sorry if you don't like this comment, I just needed to tell someone how I felt.
Guest chapter 9 . 6/12/2013
Hey dude, if it makes you feel better, not all people who know English can write it perfectly. Heck, I'm American and I'm still learning how to find mistakes in my own writing. So don't feel bad that you can't write perfectly, no one can! :)
Guest chapter 3 . 6/12/2013
I just thought of Danny having a neon green, handle bar mustache... IT'S FUNNY! XD
shin obin chapter 15 . 6/11/2013
Good story
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