|Reviews for Reaching across time|
| Honestly don't you two read chapter 105 . 11/25
Still a great story :-) second time reading it, and I could not put it down :-)
| Confused chapter 105 . 10/30
This story has been good one until the epilogues. I hate what you did with the younger Hermione. It didn't make sense at all. They Kept her locked up and away from Hogwarts? They always say that the two/same people can't see each other in the same time line or one will go crazy seeing the other? This story would have been better without the epilogues or you should have just had Sirius tell about the spell he used. You could have shown the Marauders raising their kids and not brought the other Hermione into the whole thing. It was all too bloody confusing! I'm not going to read the sequel because some stories need to be left alone.
| Ey chapter 4 . 8/10
Is this a parody? Because this is too full of pathos. Especially the way the Marauders react to Hermione, never mind she is a complete stranger... They kneel, kiss her knuckles, promise her safety and protection while she panics afraid and alone. This is too finance heroine brought back from the darkness by love of a good man. This is the suffering Mary Sue story. How does Hermione know Remus' age?
The Invisible Cloak is INVISIBLE when worn. That it is apparently visible here negates its whole purpose, power and all those times Harry successfully hid beneath it.
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/10
Hermione doesn't need a man to be herself.
Hermione was born in 1979. At the time of the final battle at Hogwarts she was 18, and would słoń, in September, turn 19. She was a year older than Harry and Ron.
Ron was her fiance? They kissed for the first time at that battle.
The scars are overdone, especially seeing as Bellatrix already gave Hermione the Mudblood scar, and it was much smaller. Anyway, there are ways to heal even Dark Magic scars. And there is always Fawkes.
| TheLittleRoguex chapter 13 . 7/24
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| TheLittleRoguex chapter 3 . 7/22