|Reviews for The New Life|
| Nobilist chapter 3 . 3/10
Okay explain to me the size of a tiny chest please.
"Then he turned back around and there was a tiny chest in his arms. It was the size of a tiny chest."
Also is Percy supposed to be the son of Poseidon or Neptune because he can read Greek not Latin so your really giving mix messages. I think you need to get a beta if these are just mistakes.
| allen r chapter 19 . 5/17/2013
I use to read this story. but sense it has not had any real percabeth in forever theres no incentive to read it anymore. flash backs and dreams are not percabeth.
| insanezane16 chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Please update, this story is awesome!
| alexhermann48 chapter 6 . 3/5/2013
I have only one question. They had SEX and she was emberassed when he saw her with a towel around herself? Like, seriously?
| alexhermann48 chapter 19 . 2/22/2013
please keep writing! im dying!
| alexhermann48 chapter 18 . 2/16/2013
I'm reviewing, im reviewing! please keep writing and being awesome!
| alexhermann48 chapter 17 . 2/16/2013
PLease keep writing. you are doing an amazing job! :D
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/27/2013
Please make new chptr!
| dragon fier 20 chapter 18 . 1/19/2013
haahahahahah, i guess that clarisse didn't expect that? haha, loved that, and i can't wait for more!
| The guy chapter 17 . 1/13/2013
Loving so far! Please don't stop making chapters!
| Erma chapter 17 . 1/3/2013
Please Please Please Do More
| dragon fier 20 chapter 17 . 1/2/2013
i totally had fun over the break, and i really like this story. i really can't wait for the next chapter, and i hope it comes soon!
| Nick chapter 16 . 12/28/2012
Nice Story! Original too!
| dragon fier 20 chapter 16 . 12/27/2012
ohhh, annabeth won't like that! i love this story and i really want to read more! plz update soon!
| kikibaby21 chapter 16 . 12/24/2012
I really like how you made me think. Will Reyna want Percy all for herself or will she want Jason back?