Reviews for Ghost Boy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Turbo. I hope he gets through this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And now we're here. The beginning. Very nicely done. I'm curious to see where you go with this. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Halfway through and things are changing. I'm glad that Turbo got a kart and gets to race. Should've seen the ending coming, yikes. Very curious to see where this goes now. Good job and I look forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very nice chapter. I really liked it. The ending especially warmed my heart. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As always, the biggest thing here was character. You did so well with everyone and I loved it. You exhibited a lot of emotion in this chapter what with the nightmare, the inability to leave and the ending. And you got all the desired effects out of it. Specifically the ending. I loved that, it really made me smile and it was great. You're continuing to do an amazing job with this story. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Biggest thing to take from this was the aspect of family. Turbo's not fitting in, but it seems that what the core four have got has developed even more after the movie and in this fanfiction. I really like that. The dynamic between all five characters was incredibly well done and I still can't help but feel bad for Turbo. But this? This is nice and I can't wait to see what more you've got. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aside from your Turbo who is great as always, I gotta compliment your Vanellope in this chapter. She was very well done and I liked that. You did a good job here. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmmm so they had no idea of what was going on with Turbo. I'm genuinely curious as to where you're headed with this, especially the Glitch Lessons. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thirty years is a while indeed. I'm curious as to where this goes, nice one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh, Turbo's kinda relatable in the way that he's an outcast. He's a jerk, but I still can't help but feel for him. You did a good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So this was interesting. Turbo watched it unfold and went berserk. I wonder when we'll get here. But I'm curious. |
![]() ![]() That was Turbo-tastic! ;u; |
![]() ![]() I have no idea how many times I said out loud "Please don't say King Candy, please don't say King Candy, please don't say King Candy..." and then it happened. I am crying right now waaaaa WAAAAA ;_; |
![]() ![]() This is my favorite chapter yet :DDDDDD |