Reviews for Slaves of Harry Potter
That Person chapter 3 . 1/17
Noice
Deenar602 chapter 17 . 1/15
Hey. I remember that you wrote, that Voldemort is going to be kille/destroyed, but nothing happened.
I know you said that no one shoul judge your story/writing in negative ways but I wrote a story my self on a german ff page (because I'm german).

Deenar602
SaintMichael95 chapter 1 . 12/9/2016
It was alright, but you made two spelling errors, pretty bad knees too. "Rowanda" is supposed to be "Rowena", "lititure" is supposed to be "literature"
Guest chapter 2 . 11/29/2016
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YOURE GAY AF
NO ONE CARES
WHAT YOU ARE WRITING HERE
I AM SORRY ABOUT WHAT I SAID xD
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2016
why did you talk about sex on the first page
Guest chapter 3 . 11/29/2016
in the first page why did you talk about sex
Guest chapter 2 . 11/29/2016
your gay af
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2016
your gay
Gobbl Gobb chapter 2 . 11/17/2016
What The Hell?
MegaHeracross214 chapter 17 . 10/14/2016
So when's the next chapter?
Guest chapter 3 . 10/1/2016
Nice
Kevin Foxboy chapter 1 . 9/19/2016
Mr Masters: I regret to inform you of multiple spelling errors that honestly mess up my enjoyment of this attempt at bondage/slave fiction.
"she saw the dead basaltic..." WTF? 'basaltic' is a type of rock; I think you meant 'basilisk', the serpent.
"groan that echoed threw the chamber" Have you heard of homonyms, different words that sound the same? I'm sure you meant 'through'.
Ginny's name is Genivra Molly Weasley, not Ginniva.
Who is Rowanda? Did you mean Rowena Ravenclaw?

As a former BDSM LARPer who was rented for domestic service, I enjoyed the imagery of young women calling someone 'master'. I just hope Harry can keep it up.
Katie chapter 8 . 9/5/2016
Very good make more books like this
SaintMichael95 chapter 4 . 7/19/2016
Yeah indont like the idea of Harry sharing any, and I mean ANY of his slaves, so I'm going to have to stop right here...
Guest chapter 8 . 7/8/2016
You need more torture... I'm getting bored and spell check it please
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