|Reviews for I'd Rather Pretend|
| Hikari Kashiwazaki chapter 7 . 17h ago
God, I like this fic! Keep writing okay? You done a great job! I notice that there aren't many fanfiction about them... So, when I read your fanfic its make me really happy _. I waiting for your newest chapter and update soon!
| xXElisiaOotoriXx chapter 7 . 2/28
Oh my God. This fanfic is amazing! waiting for an update!
| CandyDemon chapter 7 . 2/9
awesome- new chapter?¿?¿?
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/18
IT'S SO CUTEBE TOGETHER FOREVER AND EVER.
| the TumTum tree chapter 7 . 1/9
Yay for Natsume/Sasayan smut :) I hope things don't go too catastrophically wrong as a result. It struck me that there is nothing making you write them a happy ending... :(
| xxIcyAngelxx chapter 7 . 1/7
Haha I loved it!
Tbh, I was unsure about the chapter when I saw the warning. But then I remembered how awesome and unexpected your writing is and adored the scene! They would totally banter and argue even during sex xD That was hilarious, and so fitting for the both of them. Ugh I can't, I just love it when Sasayan is cool with her flippy jumpy self and out of it when she surprised him. That last bit - I wondered if he heard :o
As usual, Sasayan is a saint and Natsume is confused. But she's getting there and this chapter proved that. Now onto question of WHAT NOW?
| skinnyburrito chapter 7 . 1/5
oh my GOD this was amazing bless your soul for writing these two dorks!
| xxHeadInTheStarsxx chapter 7 . 1/5
Their sex scene was actually pretty cute and funny, but at the same time kinda hot though, so you have a glorious combination right there! It's nice to see Natsume tell Sasayan that she loves him, but when you said that sex can ruin everything, well, now you have me paranoid that this story isn't going to have an happy ending. Either way, I'm pretty excited to see how this fic ends!
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/5
I think the core of this chapter is the sex. Yup, definitely the sex.
But it doesn't feel like the story's climax. The sex was like just placed there to fill in the chapter.
But I'm okay with that. They're back together. 3
BTW, that's soft-core, IMO. middle-core porn, LOL xD
| KiraLoveless chapter 7 . 1/5
Yay, you finally updated! I've been dying to read the next chapter.
| NoodleCrepe chapter 6 . 1/5
God... this made me all teary-eyed. D'x
I love your style of writing in this fanfiction. It's presented in third person but it also captures the essence of first person, so you can know what the characters feel without limiting yourself.
Also, I noticed all your crying scenes are really detailed. While reading he last paragraph, I actually fell on the floor crying. Amazing story so far. I hope Robico makes this canon. :D
I CANT STOP CRYIIING DDD'X
| LightSpeed Athlete24 chapter 7 . 1/5
... Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu... my kokoro... the feels... (cries)
I really love how you wrote this chapter. Ugh, even though I was texting my "bro" at the same time, I couldn't help but go "d'awwwww" . :'D If I were focused on this, I think I would've cried. Srsly. So touching...
Gaaaaaaaah... you rendered me unable to write a proper review... *SOBS*
| leafysummers chapter 6 . 12/29/2013
Honestly, I feel so bad for Sasayan right now. Poor thing; he REALLY does care about her to stick around even after Natsume treats him like that. I don't see what's causing her confusion to be honest. Like Shizuku said, she's making it more difficult than it really is. Sigh. I just hope she figured this out and we can have these to reunite soon! Please update! It IS the holiday season, so it would be like a present to us!
| Bakadesunee15 chapter 6 . 12/29/2013
waah whyy?!..my kokoro cant handle it! TT
I really like your writing of Natsume and Sasayan. They're so in-character and I also really enjoy the humour diologues.
I can't wait for the next chapter and hope you'll be able to update soon! :)
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/23/2013
I'm still waiting :'( Gosh, i hate you know- Natsume.