|Reviews for ZAT: Reviving Dreams|
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/31
I can't believe it has already been almost a year since this was completed! It just shows you that great stories like this will never leave us who have read it, thank you for everything!
| X59 chapter 6 . 7/16/2013
This was a pretty interesting holiday special for ZAT. Over all I liked the whole thing from Goku and Vegeta arguing over who would defend the earth to Gohan finding himself growing, while being an immortal child. Though I will admit that I just loved the scene where Goku and Vegeta where arguing and Gohan just came in and stopped the Earth from being destroyed. The way both Goku and Vegeta were in that "It's my turn next time" mindset was hilarious.
However I thought that Icival was rather cruel. Granted the guy was an asshole and evil, but the infinite darkness seems too much for the guy. At the same time seeing Gohan reaching such a dark place was fascinating, as it proves despite his maturity he can still be influenced by his my darker desires.
When it comes to it, I think it would be better for the Sovereign (Gohan included) to make vague references to other fandoms. That way we get a glimpse of different missions they've been on in the main series and you could have noodle incidents in your story. That way the focus is on the DBZ (mainly Gohan) and allows you to have fun seeing how many people can figure out what fandom is being referred to.
To be perfectly honest I can't help but wonder if Bulma looking into dimensional travel was a sort of continuation hook for ZAT. After all I could see a couple of things coming from.
Option A.) Bulma plays around with dimensional travel and unleashes an evil that was meant to be contained.
Option B.) Bulma accidentally causes damage to dimensions and the dimensions begin to unravel,
Option C.) Bulma ignores Gohan's warning and tests out her dimensional travel. However this in turn causes a series of events that would force the Sovereign and the Z-fighters to fight one another. Throughout all this Gohan finds torn and the story would focus Gohan picking one side over the other. You know this scenario in my future is definitely the most gray-gray mortality.
Option D.) Bulma's dimensional travel research is stolen and that leads to chaos.
For the record having all these options before me, made me realize that if your sequel idea doesn't include Bulma's dimensional research at all, I have no real guess work to choose from on how this series will proceed.
Well I can't wait to see what happens next.
| FlyByReviewer chapter 6 . 7/5/2013
This story was so awesome! I like to go back and read the ZAT series because they are so inspirational! They always leave me feeling better after reading them, thanks! I nearly cry from joy after both of the conclusions to the first and this holiday special! They are so amazing and I will love to see the next journey of the ZAT stories when it arrives!
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/22/2013
Didnt ru have control over his age. If so wouldnt gohan have control over his age too?
| Angel chapter 6 . 5/29/2013
I love your fics. You r 1 of my 2 favourite writer on fanfic. The other is lucied but i dont know who is first but my favourite is ZAT:immortal saiyan. ;)
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/6/2013
I man-teared reading this. Ur the best revu
| Prats 'R' Us chapter 6 . 3/1/2013
Another great Chapter hun, I especially love Chichi's bit at the end.
Hehehe that is so Phips. Angry Phips is funny hehehe. I'm kinda sad to see the story end but it was a beautiful ending. Nicely done with Gohan's aging problem. I can't wait for your next DBZ masterpiece! D
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/23/2013
Great job! I loved the ending! It made me so happy I thought I was gonna cry! I love how everything turned out so good for Gohan and everyone! I loved seeing Phips and the Realis, it wouldn't have been the same without them! Congrats on makng another epic story, it is something special! I also hope your move goes well, good luck! Thank you for writing all of these great stories!
| VLS chapter 6 . 2/23/2013
Great finish to a great story! You definitely raised my spirits!
| Ky111 chapter 6 . 2/23/2013
Fantastic end to this holiday special and so it's revealed that even tho Gohan is immortal now he will grow but at a slower rate I guess instead of it taking say 10 years to become an adult (or at least have the appearance of one) it'll take 20/30 perhaps more years. I look forward to the continuation of ZAT but I also look forward to any other stories you having cooking up.
Until the next one.
| knAngel18 chapter 6 . 2/23/2013
This story was really great! The ending was good and definitely worth the wait. ;D
For now, I well try to wait patiently for the next installment on the ZAT series but you made it sound so good I'm already excited for it! *fangirl squeal* XD
| GamerGirlAK47 chapter 6 . 2/22/2013
Wow great job! I'm so in love with these ZAT stories :D I sure hope that there will be a part 3 of this with even more awesome adventures, Keep writing!
| person345 chapter 5 . 2/8/2013
thx 4 the update. ur gonna end the story soooo soon?
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/23/2013
Great work! It was amazing how well you transitioned Gohan from being dark and aggrressive, to so kind and do a great job of portaying his character! Great job!
| pond-centurion chapter 5 . 1/14/2013
was that a little soul eater crossover?