Reviews for Harry Potter and Merlin's Prophesy
Hawko chapter 4 . 5/18
I like the idea of a hydra for the water and a basilisk for land.
fantasyman97 chapter 4 . 4/11/2014
good start
Guest chapter 4 . 12/21/2013
Ginny should not be in the harem , and hedwig as a phoenix and a basilisk
Guest chapter 2 . 11/12/2013
... So Godric is a Nazi (blonde hair blue eyes)...
rmiser1994 chapter 4 . 8/11/2013
Interesting fic . Wonder what happens next ;P (Whenever you can - update please)
ShadowStalker1389 chapter 4 . 8/1/2013
I don't think you should add Ginny to the harem unless you make her non-fangirl like. My choice for the familiar is a basilisk and a hydra
Guest chapter 4 . 6/23/2013
no, i think ginny should be trying to get in via dumbledore
Nundu cos they are really cool names
powermachine79 chapter 4 . 5/10/2013
Sounds like a good story i hope to read more soon :)
Guest chapter 3 . 4/27/2013
No. Ginny is stupid and fangirly.
All those animals
why kill kenny chapter 4 . 4/7/2013
Please continue this story. Its a very interesting read
Brysinga chapter 4 . 3/14/2013
No to Ginny for the harem as would prefer hermione.
The familiars I would like are: Hedwig; Nundu; Basilisk; and a Hydra due to it being an unusual familiar.
Like the story so far though, keep up the good work.
Mason potter chapter 4 . 3/1/2013
Yes keep ginny there not to many stories with her in one and she is brave can can balance the relationships. She Owns harry a her life. Don't fall the fan girl crap it not her fault her family brainwash her with stories. She grew out of it and she harry as harry not the BWL harry. She a hot red head.

I Think Hydra, dragon, sphinx, dire wolf.
Sumguy chapter 2 . 2/27/2013
lol. This is terribad. You need to read more. This is not how to write fiction, or anything else, for that matter.
damon mason chapter 4 . 3/1/2013
Ginny yes. She owns a life dept to him and there to many ginny bashing on the site. Ther very few stories with her in a Harem. Chose a Basilisk and a Hydra and a royal dire wolf and golden eagle
leadingedgeofchaos chapter 4 . 2/2/2013
your making the risk of falling into the same trap every story like this does, he's already a multi-animagus
realistically what is he going to do with a dragon in the story and where would he keep him in hogwarts? i have a good idea if you want to put a dragon and some of the really powerful creatures into the story but familiars are something that travel with someone everywhere, can you see him taking a nundu down diagon alley?
its a good story so far but try not to go over the top with all the add on's that everyone seems to need to add that ruin a story, when he returns, and im assuming he returns and morgana will end up being daphne or something of the such, and with the harem, it can be used right but it can be totally abused as well, maybe morph it into a circle of friends, gives you more creative room ive found to make everyone their own person instead of just another piece of harry's arm candy, plus it lets you take the spotlight off the harry dapne relationship if it happens and turn it to his friends say maybe a neville/tracey or dare i say a draco/hermione. mainly what im saying is its a good fic so far but your running the risk of just making it to big, and making it too harry centric like there isnt anything else happening, keep it up, but dont let it run away with itself, keep it controlled
if your seeing this as hate it isnt ment to be, if you'd like to hear any idea or help feel free to PM me
keep it up :)
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