Reviews for The Usual Conflict
Composingjealousy chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Omg im excited! Please update soon!
cinderivaille chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
ohoho :D next chapter please!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
hope in that building will be Yata-chan Thank you very much! 3 dying to read next chapter!
miyame-chan chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
it looks interesting! update soon. :)
xoCeri chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
What is the main gist about? I think this will be a really good fic. Have you finished layouting? Well, this chapter is pretty short, and yeah, the title MUST be changed. Once you have the ending of the story, you can decide on the proper label. The summary isn't much of a help either. Try revising it with a twist, like sliding in some short lines or wrapping up a scene; that way your work will catch more attention. Anyway, this is a good start. The way you wrote it was perfectly fine; you got me curious of the mystery, you know. It's going to be fun, I hope! Good luck on this! I'm waiting for more! :D