Reviews for Breath In, Breath Out
Lya Darkfury chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Nice balance between action and reflection in Natasha here, very well done. I love the way you describe this whirlwind of emotions that hit her but make it very clear that she is not showing a single one of them. It fits well with her character, I think. Beautiful interaction between the two of them as well. Loved it!
Teka chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Very nicely done, and I like that you didn't have them say I love you. Good characterization!
KLS98 chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
I love this story so much it hurts! I wish it was longer. Happy Writing:)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Nice plot. I like the way you play their relationship. Some of your language seems a little flowery though, but maybe that's just me.
MyOxfordComma chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
I don't want a brownie, I want another chapter! Loved it. Thanks for writing!
newwwnameee chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Nice. I like your take. Very well done.