Reviews for Iron Souls
Sons Of Nero chapter 2 . 9/9/2013
Love this story, very well written and I'm a big fan of the general story idea keep it coming :)
heavyneos chapter 2 . 6/19/2013
i like it but how many iron warriors are there?
spartan4 chapter 2 . 2/21/2013
I like it keep the chapters coming please.
Kit chapter 2 . 1/23/2013
The story needs more depth
Mar. Aaron Walker chapter 2 . 12/9/2012
I'll Rate it five out five of pure Originality!
And May the Emperor Guide the Loyalists Iron Warriors to victory once more...

Hope You'll This Good art Comrade!
Onsholo chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
I allways loved the iron warriors and it saddened me greatly that they betrayed The "Emprah" Emperor its going to be very interesing seeing what they do now that they have a chance to fight for the Imperium again
Lost Guy chapter 2 . 12/6/2012
not bAD. as long it is not the Ultra smurfs i am happy. hell lets bring in some DA!
zezia333 chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
i like your story so far
yuzah chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
you need to drastically improve the whole reaction and interaction between the characters. The whole thing doesnt make much sense

There is no absolute way any loyal imperium member would accept the words of a traitor legion (because that's what they are for them. traitors)

they dont know who they are, they dont know their story. They just appeared out of nowhere. The normal reaction would be to fire on sight. Even if for some absurd reason they opened a comunication channel, they would never believe their words

instead you dismissed the whole encounter like it was nothing
Warmaster Tzeentch chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Very interesting, the Iron warriors are one of my favorite chaos legions next to the Thousand Sons I look foward to the next chapter.
Lost Guy chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
oh i like the idea. out of all the chaos legions that did not allign with a major god the Iron Warriors are my Fav. i hope to see these guys rebuild the chapter and challange their corrupt brtheren.