|Reviews for After Lynny's funeral, Alternative|
| Beautiful space chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
Beautiful :) It even sounds like Malorie Blackman's work
I love alternate endings. I am doing an essay on this book too, here in London. As you may have guessed, I am a teacher's pet and I made not one, but two alternate endings for the ending of this book- what if Sephy's mother, in an uncharacteristic moment of mercy for her once friend's son- had stopped the execution? And, what if Callum hadn't joined the Liberation Militia at all and ran away with Sephy to a less prejudiced place in the world?
I love it, keep on writing!
| NicoleDiAngelo16 chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
Have you heard of Daunt's Short Story competition? You could enter next year if you year's one finished I think but you could search it you just added a bit more to the story. :D I agree with your teacher and bffs
| NiquaCraid chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Short, yet beautifully written. I honestly bawled my eyes out by the time I finished the book and did not even bother reading the sequel. Good alternative, it really captured me there, good job !
| L.Harriett22 chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
:O Miss Baker Loved it XD
| CourftheCat chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
YAY YOU PUT IT UP! :)