|Reviews for Ever Changing Past|
| CapitanConejito chapter 5 . 5/1/2013
My one piece of advice presently: Separate your paragraphs. It gets rather difficult and daunting to read when you don't put the extra 'jump' of space between paragraphs. Also there were a few letters that weren't capitalized properly, but I would focus on the paragraphs seeing as it could discourage potential readers from continuing with your story.
Best of Luck
| babydake93 chapter 3 . 12/12/2012
really liking your first few chapters please update soon x