Reviews for Almanzo's Trip |
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![]() ![]() Aww! So cute! I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue! This story is so good so far! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, this is so cute! |
![]() ![]() And the manga did say what she said at that moment. |
![]() ![]() Just a word about While The Moon Weeps. The people of the Moon Kingdom were not immortal. And when did Queen Serenity not have a voice? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always thought the trip came up suddenly. I could see this going on the way you wrote it too :) |
![]() ![]() It's confusing to change from first person to second person. I understand that you are trying to elucidate Almanzo's feelings as he leaves Laura but,I have always wondered what the reason was,so why not speculate about that? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Wish you would finish it though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've enjoyed everything you have written. You can continue this way or change styles, but please continue to write. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it just the way it is! Please continue. |
![]() ![]() Please update! This is so good so far! |
![]() ![]() Hello. I just wanted to say that your story is AMAZING! I love how you write out Almanzo's character. I hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() This is good! I'm hoping you're going to include Almanzo's family grilling him about Laura/the engagement/wedding |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know if you should change your style or not, but I'm chiming in to say - I'm so glad that you have decided to update this story.. |
![]() ![]() Your writing, is fantastic. I love your point of view on this story. I will be anxiously awaiting your next update! Keep writing! :) |