Hm...yet another really decent officer goes down in the line of duty. I respect that. Pity. His death was inevitable, no matter how hard he tried. Great story though. The ending was saddening and how it should have been I guess. Leaving us to guess. Did he fully turn? Did he eventually just shoot himself? Never know unless you yourself say. I'd give it a 5 outta 5. Once again, great story.

A nice touch... good fic... you should write more!

A very interesting fanfic, and I am surprised that the story seemed so accurate, even though you have played none of the games. Although, there is one error; I found this out when I began to write my own RE original. The cop that Leon encounters is named Marvin Banagh, and is important because he is seen again in Resident Evil 3. But, I understand you would not know this because in S.D. Perry's : Resident Evil; City of the Dead (The 3rd one), the author never mentions the cop.

wow! AND YOVE NEVER EVEN PLAYED THE GAME? i loved this story, write

more untold stories pleeze

*sniff* that last part got me... most stories dont make me do that u know

Great piece of RE introspective. I always had a soft spot for the poor guy, and you managed to give him a background and personality, which is, admittedly, no easy feat when you take into consideration that he gets about a minute and a half of coherent screen time. Keep up the good work!

Great Job. You have real talent. One correction however: The dying cop in resident evil 2 is named Marvin Branagh. just FYI

Hiya! I've never played the game either, but that was really good. Great job! :o)