|Reviews for Unbelievable|
| CountryBaby93 chapter 9 . 2/8
I really tried to read this story. And I think it is a good story. But it is moving way to fast and focused only on the conflict. Like examples such as. Bella immediately took to jasper and jumped into his arms. And kassie immediately took to the family after all that happened to her. The. I absolutely don't like those parts about kassie. It's disgusting. The story as a whole is just
... poorly constructed. I'm sorry. This is not a flame.
| Cacau Black chapter 2 . 11/17/2016
| Cacau Black chapter 1 . 11/17/2016
| andrewpine chapter 9 . 10/26/2016
Could have used a beta to check over your grammar,it needs help.
| andrewpine chapter 7 . 10/26/2016
She had torn off my pants...Will you have Alice and Vicky teaming up,one to try to kill Kassie and the other to try to kill Bella to get her so called mate back?
| andrewpine chapter 6 . 10/26/2016
She had gone over her trail...
| andrewpine chapter 2 . 10/26/2016
I could vaguely see...Wonder what the veggies will do when they find out that Eddie is dead? will there be trouble with Alice now he is gone? we all know she forced Bella on to Eddie hoping he would kill her and she could get her claws on Jasper.
| andrewpine chapter 1 . 10/26/2016
It is quiet not quite...he should have shot Eddie with fear to keep him from running like the little bitch he is.
| Kushka chapter 24 . 8/14/2016
| scarlson31 chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
Agreed...did NOT see that coming! Well played!
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/7/2016
I just wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying reading your stories. I have been slowly reading through all the Jasper Bella stories you have written.. You my friend are
very talented,please think about writing a Peter and Bella story sometime pretty please...
| Caliborn96 chapter 9 . 3/21/2016
Okay how can she be six but have had 4 or 5 miscarriages? Doesn't make sense
| OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 1/31/2016
Keep up the good work loving it
| faletoimj chapter 24 . 5/5/2015
I really love this story. Perfect. Thank you. Please keep up with the good work, your stories are interesting.
| B4bidden.Products chapter 24 . 4/17/2015
Omfg! (sorry if my abbreviation offended anybody) but this is the best story. I've been trying to write a story myself at the moment but keep having writers block. So been able to read a story that has kept me up until 4am has made me relax alot so I may be able to get some writing done in afew hours when I wake. So a huge THANK YOU