The only thing missing from this was Trapper John. I feel like he should have been included at some point. He was Hawk's original partner-in-crime in the gorilla suit, after all, so even though he never met Beej on on the show, I always feel sure that Hawk would have introduced the two of them at some point. Or, at the very least, kept in contact with Trapper, too. But I can see the 3 of them as the 3 Musketeers of pranking... oh, it would be such fun.

BTW, you have this marked as complete. You don't really mean that, do you? I would like to hear more of this story. For instance, if somewhere along the line Andrew and Dani get serious, I'm sure Hawkeye and BJ would throw him quite the bachelor party.

What a cool story, and I really enjoyed your OCs! Nicely done, thanks for sharing.

I hope you keep going! I've been highly entertained by your creative writing!

This story is good i'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

A perfect chapter for a perfect day! Beautifully done!

Loved the interaction between Hawkeye, BJ and Chalres! Looking forward to the next chapter.

This is pretty entertaining, though it took a little time to adjust from one chapter to the next. Keep up the story!

I'm really enjoying this. Love the idea.

Another great chapter! Keep it up!

This is very interesting and well-written. It's going to be a long one, isn't it? Hooray! I loved the line about Hawkeye having an advanced degree in smooth-talking. :-)

I look forward to reading more.

This is great! Looking forward to more!