|Reviews for Issho ni Itai|
| Amethyst3260 chapter 1 . 7/21
OMG i loved this so much and I like it so much better than the real 16.5
This is what I imagined it would be like.
| Kirito-Kun chapter 1 . 5/24
Unlike others this actually sounds like me.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/18
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/28
In my head this is now the canon chapter 16.5, not only was it more realistic but it was much better written. Awesome!
| Laughing Coughin chapter 1 . 1/27
Thank you thank you thankyouthankyou THANK YOU! This was exactly how 16.5 *should* have been written! I was planning on taking a crack at writing a revised version myself but I see you already made the necessary correction.
Only one, totally forgivable mistake in this - there was no glopping. :)
| Georgia chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
| James Dragonmancer chapter 1 . 10/31/2015
Awesome lemon fic. Way better than 16.5. The only complaint I would voice if I had to pic one is that the fanart link you have doesn't work. The art has been deleted apparently.
| jcampbellohten chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
I like this, short as it is. Very sweet.
| 88Asuna88 Doctor Who Fan too chapter 1 . 7/21/2015
| saolover chapter 1 . 6/28/2015
It was great, keep it up. This is one of the best story I ever read.
| ZariyaVera chapter 1 . 6/4/2015
beautiful, emotional and well-written
| Itzmepam chapter 1 . 5/26/2015
Imaginary hat off my friend.. This was exquisite... Exactly what i thought chapter 16.5 should have been... Kuddos!
| SZ chapter 1 . 4/24/2015
Very nice. :) I like how you incorporated the virtual aspects, too!
| loveangel7 chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
That was... God! It was beautiful! You left me wordless, love it!
| Peachberry chapter 1 . 2/12/2015
kirito belong's to asuna . :)