Reviews for Merry Christmas, my Beloved
Edhla chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
This is a nicely nuanced and really well written fic with some great descriptions. I particularly like your occasionally snarky parenthical comments (the one about Ben being too old for her daughter was great.)

Again, your descriptions are top-knotch and you write with all five senses, with expressions like "cinnamon lash" or "burning gold." Good sense of rhythm with your sentences, too. Well done :)